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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I would like to study English for a job. This year, I’m probably going to be a CPA (Certified Public Accountant). I must to be able to talk with Business people from several countries. Also I will have discussion in English too,and It will be need to able to have some small talks and some private. I want to be able to travel abroad and to visit a lot of World Heritages in private. That's way I'm leaning English.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I would like need to study English for a my job.  This year, I’m probably going to be a certified public accountant (CPA ). I must to be able to talk speak with business people from several different countries.  Also I will have discussion in English too,need to be able to handle conference discussions, make small talk and social conversations, private or otherwise.  and It will be need to able to have some small talks and some private.

I want to be able to travel abroad and to visit a lot of many world heritages in private.
sites. That's way I'm leaning English.

You don't need to leave an extra blank line after every sentence.  It's an old fashion way of teachers correcting your mistakes manually.

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Thanks a lot! I have a lot of tips to learning.
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I forgot to correct "leaning" to "learning" in the last sentence.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I would like to study English for to enable me to get a job.

This year, I’m probably going to be a CPA (Certified Public Accountant).

I must, therefore, to be able to talk speak with business people from several various countries.

Also, I will have discussions in English too, and it will be need to able to have including some small talks and some private conversations.

I want to be able to travel abroad for leisure and to visit a lot many of the UNESCO World Heritage sites. in private.

That's way why I'm leaning English.

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