疯狂的天气

今天寒冷和多云。
It's cold and cloudy today.
我仍然生病著。
I'm still sick.
不幸的是,這是冬季 。
Unfortunately, it’s winter.
不是，現在是秋季。
No, it’s fall now.
然而，这感觉就像是冬季。
However, it feels like it's winter.
我不喜欢冷天气。
I abhor cold weather.

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疯狂的天气

今天寒冷和多云。
It's cold and cloudy today.
我仍然在生病。
I'm still sick.
这是冬季，好可惜 。
Unfortunately, it’s winter.
不是，这是秋季。
No, it’s fall now.
然而，这感觉就像是冬季。
However, it feels like it's winter.
我不喜欢冷天气。
I abhor cold weather.

疯狂的天气

今天寒冷和多云。
It's cold and cloudy today.
我还在生病了。
I'm still sick. 
很可惜，现在是冬天 。
Unfortunately, it’s winter.
不是，这是秋季。
No, it’s fall now.
还有（然而），这感觉就像它的冬季。
However, it feels like it's winter.
我不喜欢冷天气。
I abhor cold weather.

疯狂的天气

多变（“duo bian” means changeable）的天气

今天寒冷和多云。

今天很冷（“寒冷”usually be used as an abjective "寒冷的天气=cold weather），“很”means very “很冷”means very cold），并且多云（“和”usually used between two words belongs to the same kind, for example 'apple and orange' can be said "苹果（ping guo）和橘子（ju zi)" “并且”can link two sentences,and a coma often appears before it.

我生病了。

它的冬季后可惜 。
哎，冬天来了。（Winter is coming）In a diary, ppl prefer to use "冬天”instead of “冬季”。

不是，这是秋季。

不，现在还是秋天。（now=现在，still=还，it's still in autumn.)

还有，这感觉就像它的冬季。
但是，这天气更像冬天。（In Chinese,ppl prefer to say "the weather" instead of "it", we would like to write something clearly so that when ppl read, they can easily know what it means. So that's also the reason if you read an essay, you can read it from the middle and know the sentence's meaning.)

我不喜欢冷天气。

(That's right. I have to say that u r really a good learner, and forgive my suggestion in the e-mail I wrote to you just now. Just because I found that writing an essay in Chinese here is a better choice.HAHA....

今天寒冷和多云
--> 今天多云，非常冷。

我生病了。
--> 我还在生病。

它的冬季后可惜 。
-->  非常不幸，现在是冬天。("it" is not needed here)

不是，这是秋季。
--> 不，是秋天。

还有，这感觉就像它的冬季。
--> 但感觉就像冬天一样。

我不喜欢冷天气。
--> 我讨厌寒冷的天气。