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First notebook entry: Introducing myself In my life a had a lot of wish.now i got something.but some important wish has not came true yet.espacialy learining English very well.but since these three years,i laern it again and again.now my situation is not bad.but about myself it's not enough.so first i must study it very well;second,make good and unforgetteble friendship.i wish that develope each other and dedicated for society. thank you!!!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I have had a lot of wish hope (希望) in for my life. Now I got have acheived something some things, but some important wish has other goals have not came true, yet. ; espacialy especially since learining I have not learned English very well. but since these In the past three years,i laern it again and again I have refocused my energy to seriously learn English. now Now my situation is not bad. has improved, but about for myself, it's this is not enough. so So first firstly, I must study it very well even more if I want to improve; second, secondly, I must make good and unforgetteble friendships. i I wish that hope to develope encourage (加油) each other my fellow man and dedicated for enrich society. Thank you!!!

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Try not to overuse ("it.")
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yes english language it is very important to learn or study any thing ^_^

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