First notebook entry: Introducing myself

We need language tohelp us learn about different the cultures and people.
Once we are able to express ourselves, everything will be easier to do.
We need to study throughout our lives. whole life.
I plan to travel in the future, so I'm studying English.

문장에서첫단어의첫글자는대문자로써야합니다.

언어그리고국적을대문자로쓰세요. 

그건대문자로써야합니다.   

단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             

이건더자연스럽거나더일반적인방법의표현입니다.   

맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.   

제코멘트나  제안입니다.     

열쇠색을낸시4366으로만들었습니다. 도움이됐으면좋겠습니다. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

we need language to get to know about the culture and people.
once we are able to use this tool, it is much more easy to approach everything.
we need to study for our whole life.
for this travel im studying english.

We need language to get to know understand about other cultures and people.
Once we are able to use this tool, it is much very easy to approach everything others.
We need* to study for our whole life. (*The word "should" sounds better but has a slightly different meaning than "need".)
For this travel im studying english. (This whole sentence just doesn't make sense, maybe you wanted to say something like "On this website I'm going to learn English!" or maybe "For traveling reasons I want to study English!")

Hopefully this helps! Contact me sometime if you want to talk or need more help! =D