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There are significant problems with the Korean education. One of the
problems is students in Korea have no opportunity to develop their creative
thinking skills because they are taught to study only for the test. In Korea, Korean students just (only) memorize the answers. They're
forced to memorize every subject except for Mathmatics. I don't think Korean education will improve (anytime soon). < 전 추측했어요.

The subject of English is a good example of the ugly side of the Korean education(al system).

Even in high school, the teachers in school don't teach students how to write their own English sentences.  Because of this, if a student isn't willing to study on his (or her) own, he (or she) will never write a single sentence themselves with any amount of confidence even though they may have studied English for many years.

아주 안 바쁘다면, 당신은 내 다음 에세이를 수정할 수 있어요, 주세요?  내가 당신의 에세이를 확인했어므로,  그건 좀 예의를 것이다.기존의 문장 안에서 수정해 주세요 그리고 수정된 부분에  색을 사용해주시기 바랍니다.  다른 사람이 수정했더라도 추가적인 수정은 언제나 환영합니다.

그건대문자로써야합니다.   

단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             

이건더자연스럽거나더일반적인방법의표현입니다.   

맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.   

제코멘트나  제안입니다.     

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There are significant problems in Korean education system. One of the

problems is  the students in Korea cannot develop their creative

thinking because they study just for the test. In their schools, Korean students 

don't learn about how to make it but how to answer only. They are

forced to memorize everything except  Mathematics, which is the subject that

needsscreative thinking, with the systems of test unchanged. There was 

no improvement of education system in this country. English subject, for

instance, is a good example of this system's ugly side. The school teacher, even in high

schools, doesn't teach the way of writing English. So if a student doesn't himself/herself

want to study, he or she will never be able to write a single sentence, with confidence,

even though that student has been learning that foreign language for at least 9 years.