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Lucy 's notebook entry: Jul 09, 2010 - My daily life It's totally hot summer here in korea. When it's winter, i miss summer and when it's summer, i have a opposite mind. It makes me feel i'm fickle. I'm working for a design studio in seoul. I set off to work at 8:00 AM. I get to the office 20 to 30 minutes ago then i do learn english till 9:00AM. I used to be late at work. One day I felt shame of that behavior. I thought if i can't manage my life well, If i don't have the rule of my life, I have nothing to achieve. I'll try to get up earlier than now till i make the time for exercise in the morning. sohyun

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Lucy 's notebook entry: Jul 09, 2010 - My daily life

Red - Capitalization ---- Capitalize these words in every dialogue. 
                                       Make a list of words to be capitalized and soon you will know what kind of
                                       words to capitalize.  It's very tiring to correct every time you > ' i ' and it's easy
                                        to learn.  If  you submit another entry with " i " not capitalized I maybe you
                                         don't understand English well enough to learn it / but I think you do!

Countries and Languages and Ethnicities are capitalized. >  Korea - Seoul - English
All people,  people name and titles, Places (proper nouns) are capitalized > I'm - I, President Obama
Holidays, Months, Days of the week are capitalized > Monday, May
am/pm is not capitalized.

Blue - Correction / you were wrong or not understandable / how we say it.
Green - Better way to say / more age - content appropriate

It's very hot summer here in Korea. When it's winter, I miss summer and when it's summer, I miss winter. It makes me feel like I'm fickle.   indecisive. (means can't make a decision) < it's a better word - usually only other people call other people fickle/but you wouldn't call yourself fickle.

"Totally" sound like a teenager talking - trying to be cool. 

I'm working for a design studio in Seoul.
I leave for  work at 8:00 am.
I get to the office 20 or 30 minutes later. Then I study English  untill 9:00AM.  ( 'til is okay, but it's very casual)

I used to be late at work. One day I felt ashamed of this behavior.
I thought if I can't manage my life well, if i don't have control of my life, then I (can acheive nothing / or maybe you meant / have acheived nothing..
So, I'll try to get up earlier than I do now and I will even make the time for exercise in the morning.

sohyun
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I feel the same way about the seasons. I used to think it made me fickle, too, but I think it just means I look forward to the change. :)
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계속 열심히 해요!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 잘 했어요! Good job!!!! Keep going!!!

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