First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi! my My name is Wan Mohammad Shazlan, but and everyone should just can call me Shazlan. My parents give me that name. [Hmmmm...sorry, but don't all parents give their children their names? As "just" a sentence, it is okay, but if you were trying to convey something else, I didn't understand what it was.  Perhaps, culturally, there is some significance to that act, but to me, it is already known.  As is, it is somewhat self-evident, self-explanatory, much like writing "When I was born, I was close to my mother!" Yes, that's true, but where else would you be? If, instead, your aunt or uncle gave you your name, that would be the place to tell us that as it then had some significance.] I am from Kelantan, a beautiful state located at on the east eastern coast of peninsular Peninsular Malaysia. I am a student of Kolej Kemahiran Tinggi MARA Kuala Beranang, where I am pursuing my degree in Mechanical Engineering.  Afterwards/Later on, I wish/want/hope/expect to continue my studies in Japan to pursue my study for mechanical engineering for 3 years and later continue my study to Japan.
I am learning English simply because i I love learning to learn it, but  and also because it can make will allow/enable me to be/become the best communicate person. a better communicator.

Good job! An excellent introduction and easily, the best I've read so far. It was Informative and well thought-out. Please continue writing and posting! Perhaps the next time I'm in Thailand (Feb. of 2012), I'll visit Malaysia on my way to Singapore!

Hi! My name is Wan Mohammad Shazlan and everyone can call me Shazlan.[space] My parents gave me that name.[space] I am from Kelantan, a beautiful state located at in the east coast of Peninsular Malaysia.[space] I am a student of Kolej Kemahiran Tinggi MARA Kuala Beranang to where I will be pursuing my study in mechanical engineering for three years and later I shall continue my studies in Japan. 

I am learning English because I love to learning it and also because it can make me to become the best a better communicative person.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi! My name is Wan Mohammad Shazlan but everyone can call me Shazlan.My parents gave me that name.I am from Kelantan, which is a beautiful state located in the east of the  Malaysian peninsula. I am a  student of Kolej Kemahiran ,Tinggi MARA Kuala Beranang  where  I will be  pursuing my studies for Mechanical Engineering for three years and later  I shall continue my studies in  Japan.
I am learning English because  I love learning  it  because  English can make me to be the best communicative person.