A frightend adventure
"Don't be silly! We can't do this!"
Mark looks at me. I can see his doubts.
"Come on. It's gonna be fun." But the look in his eyes doesn't change. I sight. Why it's so hard to persuade him?
"Well, in first place it could sound frightend, but once you've started, you can't stop. And if you don't like it, which I doubt, we can still go home." I look at Mark with expectation.
"Alright, we'll do it." Although he agreed, he doesn't seem convinced.
"Thank you! You'll not regret it."
With meaningful steps we enter the nudist beach.
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A frightening adventure
"Don't be silly! We can't do this!"
Mark looks at me. I can see his doubts.
"Come on. It's gonna be fun." But the look in his eyes doesn't change. I sight. Why is it so hard to persuade him?
"Well, in first place it could be frightening, but once you've started, you can't stop. And if you don't like it, which I doubt, we can still go home." I look at Mark with expectation.
"Alright, we'll do it." Although he agreed, he didn't seem to be convinced.
"Thank you! You'll not regret it." (correct, but more natural to say "you won't regret it")
With meaningful steps we enter the nudist beach.
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This is hilarious! I just enjoyed reading it. No corrections since you already have them, I just wanted to thank you for making it entertaining. You know, I don't even know if we have nude beaches on the southern east coast in the US. This is a norm I just don't understand. I'm uncomfortable enough going to a regular beach in a bathing suit! No judgements of course, just not for me!
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A frightening adventure
"Don't be silly! We can't do this!"
Mark looks at me. I can see he's doubtful.
"Come on. It's gonna be fun."
But the look in his eyes doesn't change. I sigh. Why is it so hard to persuade him?
"Well, at first it might sound frightening, but once you've started, you won't be able to stop. And if you don't like it, which I doubt, we can still go home." I look at Mark expectantly.
"Alright, we'll do it." Although he agrees at last, he doesn't seem convinced.
"Thank you! You'll not regret it."
Walking with purpose, we enter the nudist beach.
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