Movie: "The Old Man and the Sea":电影：《老人与海》

Today, I watched the a movie named called, "The Old Man and The Sea".  I’d like to say something. make some comments.

今天，我看了电影《老人与海》,于是想说点什么。

So Many years ago, when I was a kid, I always remembered the article named reading "The Old Man and The Sea" ,which was written by the American writer named Hemingway.  I always remember 1 In my mind, there was the spirit of this the poor,old and brave man in his article.In my life,the spirit of old man always who encourages me in my life to overcome all kinds of difficulties.
许多年以来，我一直记得孩童时代的时候读过的那篇美国作家海明威Hemingway
的《老人与海》文章，也记得作者笔下描述的那个贫穷，苍老却勇敢的老人。在我的生活中，老人的精神一直鼓励着我克服生活中的各种困难。

The soliloquy of the movie clearly showed us the old man’s inward world.   It is not only so peaceful and compassionate beneficent,but also brave and beneficent courage and showing no signs of fear.
电影中的独白，它清楚地把老人的内心世界展现给了人们。他是如此的平和和慈祥，却又如此的勇敢和无所畏惧。

In this movie,the good-to-excellent care of the little boy to the old man makes me warm.What he did fully showed the genuine, kind-hearted and beautiful human nature. It gives me such warmth in my heart to see the little boy in the movie was so meticulous in his care for the old man.  What he did presented the human qualities of truth, goodness and beauty.

片中,小男孩对老人无微不至的关心和照顾令我感到温馨。他所做的充分地展示了人性的真，善，美。

I love this article the essay and the movie very much. It lets people find a strength and spirint of never say never They let us find our spiritual strength.  What is More importantly is it showed us the genuine, kind-hearted and beautiful the truth, goodness and beauty of human nature is revealed.
我是非常喜欢这篇文章和这部电影的。它让人获得一股永不言败的精神力量，更重要的是，它展示了人类的真，善，美。

One good turn deserves another. What the old man and the little boy did for one another proved did for the little boy and what the little boy did for the old man proved this adage rule.
善有善报。老人为小孩所做的以及和小孩为老人所做的证明了这一规则。

I am thinking,when a man is alone,he is not lonely when his heart is enriched.must be don’t feel lonely if his heart is full. The old man who is alone ,he looked the sea,the bird and fish on as his friends, Do you think this lonesome old man was lonely just because his friends are the ocean, the flying birds and fishes? In my opinion As I see it 2,he wasn’t lonely at all. Everything was Anything can be his friends.  When he said something muttering to himself, he had a best friend ,that his best friend was himself!
我想，一个人孤单的时候，只要他的心是充实的，他就一定不会孤单。这个孤单的老人，他把大海，飞鸟，鱼当作自己的朋友。你认为他孤单吗？在我看来，他并不孤单。任何事物都是他的朋友。当他自言自语的时候，他还有一个最好的朋友，那就是他自己。

Actually,for us,everyone is his we are our best friends. - only if we completely understand ourselves. When you have a faith in yourself; when you trust yourself  and when you keep love in your heart3, you won’t feel lonely.
其实，我们每一个人都是自己最好的朋友，只有我们自己才真正了解自己的。当你满怀信心的时候，当你相信自己的时候，当你心中充满着爱的时候，你是不会感到孤单的。

Good piece of writing.  I am glad you followed my advice of providing a Chinese version of your essay.  Not only is it easier for me to correct, it also forces you to focus on your English writing.  Of course both languages are different.  At least you can see how the differences in expressing the same idea in different languages.  Now you will see where you go wrong and your English will improve tremendously.

1.  This is not incorrect as from your Chinese.  I changed this because it has the same structure and using the same words from the previous sentence.  Too close in proximity.  Makes the writing dull.  Another kind of decision a translator has to make whether to follow the original text as close as possible or to have a more natural flow for the reader.

2.  This is not incorrect.  I just feel this phrase is too technical without warmth in here.

3.  In your original Chinese, the translation should be "when your heart is filled with love..."  However I love how you translate this.  This is novel and makes your writing stand out apart and so it becomes interesting.

Movie: "The Old Man and the Sea"  电影：《老人与海》

Today, I watched a movie called, "The Old Man and The Sea".  I’d like to . make some comments.

今天，我看了电影《老人与海》,于是想说点什么。

Many years ago, when I was a kid, remembered  reading "The Old Man and The Sea" , written by theAmerican writer Hemingway. In my mind, there was the spirit of this poor,old, brave man whoencourages me in my life to overcome all kinds of difficulties.
我记得，许多年以前，我还是一个孩子的时候读过美国作家海明威
的《老人与海》。在我的心里，那个贫穷，苍老，勇敢的老人的精神一直鼓励着我克服生活中的各种困难。

The soliloquy of the movie clearly showed us the old man’s inward world.   It is not only peaceful and compassionate but  courage and showing no signs of fear.
电影中的独白，它清楚地把老人的内心世界展现给了人们。他是如此的平和和慈祥，却又如此的勇敢和无所畏惧。

It gives me such warmth in my heart to see the little boy in the movie was so meticulous in his care for theold man.  What he did presented the human qualities of truth, goodness and beauty.

片中,小男孩对老人无微不至的关心和照顾令我感到温馨。他所做的展示了人性的真，善，美。

I love the essay and the movie very much. They let us find our spiritual strength.  More importantly, thetruth, goodness and beauty of human nature is revealed.
我是非常喜欢这篇文章和这部电影的。它们让我们获得一股精神力量。更重要的是，它展示了人类的真，善，美。

One good turn deserves another. What the old man and the little boy did for one another proved this adage .
善有善报。老人和小孩为对方所做的证明了这一谚语。

I  think,when a man is alone,he is not lonely when his heart is enriched. Do you think this lonesome oldman was lonely just because his friends are the ocean, the flying birds and fishes? As I see it ,he wasn’t lonely at all. Anything can be his friends.  When muttering to himself, his best friend was himself!
我想，一个人孤单的时候，只要他的心是充实的，他并不孤单。当这个孤独的老人把大海，飞鸟，鱼当作朋友的时候，你认为他是孤单的吗？在我看来，他根本不孤单。任何事物都能成为他的朋友。当他自言自语的时候，他最好的朋友，就是他自己。

Actually, we are our best friend, only if we completely understand ourselves. When you have faith inyourself; when you trust yourself  and when your heart is filled with love, you won’t feel lonely.
事实上，我们是自己最好的朋友，只有我们自己才真正了解自己的。当你满怀信心的时候，当你相信自己的时候，当你心中充满着爱的时候，你是不会感到孤单的。

Remark:

The soliloquy of the movie clearly showed us the old man’s inward world.   It is not only peaceful and compassionate but  courage and showing no signs of fear.
电影中的独白，它清楚地把老人的内心世界展现给了人们。他是如此的平和和慈祥，却又如此的勇敢和无所畏惧。

Regarding to the setence: It is not only peaceful and compassionate but courage and showing no signs of fear.

I’d like to say,if the peaceful should be peace or not.So that  peace,compassionate,courage,showing no signs of fear are all  noun.

我想说的是，是否Peaceful应该是Peace呢？这样，peace,compassionate,courage,showing no signs of fear都是名词了。

But in my mind,I’d like to express the old man’s inward world  is peaceful,kind-hearted,brave,dauntless,what sould I express it in english?

但在我的心里，我想表达的是，这个老人的内心世界是平和的，仁慈的，勇敢的，无所畏惧的。如果用英语表达它，我该如何表达呢？