Diary 25 August
Would you mind correcting my diary?
I'm in training writing English.
I woke up early this morning.
When I opened the window, cool wind blew into the room.
That made me happy and I decided to bake bread.
Although I thought it would be baked before seven thirty, it took longer than I expected.
It was baked at seven forty-five.
My son ate up 3 pieces of bread immediately,and said me to make some rice balls.
It was about at seven fifty-five.
He has to leave home at 8 o'clock!
I made a rice ball in a hurry!
I must have gotten up early, but why is it so hectic in the morning!?
It's unbelievable!
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Diary 25 August
Would you mind correcting my diary?
I'm in training writing in English.
I woke up early this morning.
When I opened the window, cool wind blew into the room.
That made me happy and I decided to bake bread.
Although I thought it would be baked before seven thirty, it took longer than I expected.
It was baked at seven forty-five.
My son ate up 3 pieces of bread immediately,and said me to asked me to make some rice balls.
It was about at seven fifty-five.
He has to leave home at 8 o'clock!
I made a rice ball in a hurry!
I must have had gotten up early, but why is it so hectic in the morning!?
It's unbelievable!
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