Editing of screenplay
1. There was darkness everywhere: the cars are on the empty roads, people are all in the strong panic. The United Nations military observer patrols guard entry to the city. Security officers are making disinfecting cleaning there. Besides, soldiers are killing infected people because they can increase the risks of infection transmission.
2. The people are in the long queues for the foodstuff. The riot had taken place in this colony because it turns out that there are food-insecure. Soldiers are trying to control this situation. Also, there happened violent clashes because most of the people had to cope with the free spaces in the quarantine zones. Before entering safe places medical workers are checking people for infection in the blood.
3. In the outside, [zombified] humans are blithely searching for the fresh flesh.
4. There is a springwood. It was rainy recently: the drop of water is dripping from the lives while the river is flowing and birds singing. Dark clouds are slowly going away behind the mountains.
THE HEADLIGHTS ARE IN THE MOTION
5. There are two men in the Mitsubishi Pajero SUV in the camera captured.
Alex (28) is a young man. Dressed in the red sweater. Sits behind the wheel.
Stephen (35) is a stern-faced man. He has a tattoo of the crow in his neck. Dressed in the black turtleneck and vest.
Sarah is a big German shepherd, who sits in the backseat.
This team is looking outwards. They are seeking someone.
SUV stops.
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I don't know the format of writing screenplays but at least I know how the wording should sound like.
1. There was Darkness was everywhere. the Cars are on the empty roads. People are all in the strong panic. The United Nations military observers patrolling guard the entry to the city. Security officers are making disinfecting cleaning there. Besides, soldiers are killing The infected people because are killed off as they can increase the risks of infection transmission.
2. The people are in the Long queues for the foodstuff. The A riot had taken place in this colony because it turns out that there are as food-insecure supplies had become scarce. Soldiers are trying to control this the situation. Also, there happened Violent clashes because most of the people had to cope with occurred do to the limited the free spaces in the quarantine zones. Before entering any safe place,s medical workers personnel are checking people for infected in the blood.
3. In the Outside of the safety zones, [zombified] humans zombies are blithely searching for the fresh flesh.
4. There is a Springwood. It was had rained recently. the Droplets of water is are dripping. from the lives while The river is flowing and birds are singing. Dark clouds are slowly going away are passing slowly behind the mountains. THE TWO HEADLIGHTS ARE MOVINGIN THE MOTION
5. There are Two men in the a Mitsubishi Pajero SUV. in The Camera up close captured.
Alex (28), is a young man, dressed in the a red sweater, . Sits behind the wheel.
Stephen (35) , is a stern-faced man. He with has a tattoo of the a crow on his neck. Dressed in the a black turtleneck and vest.
Sarah is a big German shepherd, who sitting in the backseat.
The SUV stops.
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Editing of screenplay
1. There was darkness everywhere: the cars are on the empty roads, people are all in the a strong panic. The United Nations military observer patrols guard entry to the city. Security officers are making disinfectant disinfecting cleaning there. Besides, soldiers are killing infected people because they can increase the risks of infection transmission.
2. The people are in the long queues for the foodstuff. The riots had taken place in this colony because it turns out that there they are food-insecure. Soldiers are trying to control this situation. Also, there happened violent clashes happened because most of the people had to cope with the free spaces in the quarantine zones. Before entering these safe places medical workers are checking people for the infection in their the blood.
3. In the outside, [zombified] humans are blithely searching for the fresh flesh.
4. There is a springwood. It was rainy rained recently: the drops of water is are dripping from the lives leaves while the river is flowing and birds are singing. Dark clouds are slowly going away passing behind the mountains.
THE HEADLIGHTS ARE IN THE MOTION
5. There are two men in the Mitsubishi Pajero SUV in the camera captured.
Alex (28) is a young man. Dressed in a the red sweater. Sits behind the wheel.
Stephen (35) is a stern-faced man. He has a tattoo of a the crow in his neck. Dressed in a the black turtleneck and vest.
Sarah is a big German shepherd, who sits in the backseat.
This team is looking outwards. They are seeking someone.
SUV stops.
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For screenplay, typically you would lay out image by image or scene by scene what you can see and what you can hear.
In the English language world. there are some conventions about how your screenplay "should" be formatted.
Aaaggh - zombies scare me !
https://screenwriting.io/how-do-i-write-a-screenplay/
https://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/arts/features/howtowrite/screenplay.shtml
http://www.wordplayer.com/
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