My hobbies
Hello, today I will tell about my hobbies. First hobby is play games, I like it because it help me to cold down and give a festive to me. Game that I always play is Roblox because it have many styles of game and I never bory when play this game. Second hobby is watch animes because it give me a funny and happy. Animes have many of theme some anime have fighting scene or mysterious. A anime that I like is Jojo Bizarre Adventure because it not have a fighting only but it has mysterious and use flexible to win their enemies. Jojo Bizarre Adventure is about Jostar family that recieve a boy name Dio Brando and him become a vampire by stone mask and hijack Jonathan Jostar body. So, jostar family will hunt Dio for eliminate him.Third hobby is collect models because went I watch animes and I found model of character that I like it, I will buy it. My favorite models are Gunpla line because it has many kind of detail in every models and it can custom to be own model by change colors or add a parts to make accessories or weapons. Fourth is cooking because my family have a own restaurant so, I will help my parents to cook a food. A food that I like to cook are somtam, omelets and, fried rice because I like to eat it and it delicious. Fifth is exercise because it help me healthy and strong. My exercise are doing by boxing, running and, hung bar. I do it by 4 day per weeks because I will cool down muscle, if I do every day my muscle will work hard and will hurt. So, this is my favorite hobbies that I like and I hope someone advice me in this paragraph.
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My hobbies
Hello, today I will tell talk about my hobbies. The first hobby I want to talk about is playing games, I like it because it helps me to cold cool down and give a festive to me makes me very happy. One game that I always play is Roblox because it have has many styles of game and I never bory worry when I play this game. My second hobby is watching animes because it give me a is funny and makes me happy. Animes have many of themes. Some animes have fighting scenes or are mysterious. An anime that I like is Jojo Bizarre Adventure because it does not only have a fighting scenes only but it has is also mysterious and the characters use flexible flexibility to win beat their enemies. Jojo Bizarre Adventure is about the Jostar family that who receive take in a boy named Dio Brando. and him He becomes a vampire by stone mask and hijacks Jonathan Jostar's body. So, the Jostar family will hunt Dio for to eliminate him. (I don't really understand that sentence. Sorry). My third hobby is collecting models because went when I watch animes and I found find a model of character that I like it, I will buy it. My favorite models are in the Gunpla line because it has their models have many kind of details in every models and it you can customise to be your own model by changing colors or adding a parts to make accessories or weapons. Fourth is come cooking because my family has a their own restaurant, so, I will help my parents to cook a food. A food Some dishes that I like to cook are somtam, omelets and, fried rice because I like to eat it and it is delicious. Fifth is come exercise because it helps me be healthy and strong. My The exercise I do are doing by boxing, running and, hung bar. I do it by 4 day per a weeks because I will need to let my muscles rest cool down muscle, if I do did exercise every day, my muscles will would work too hard and they will would hurt. So, this is those are my favorite hobbies that I like and I hope someone will give me advice me in for this paragraph.
Keep working hard and you will become better at english. You need to pay attention to the verbs (using the right tense, putting an "s" for he, she, it when you talk in the present. Also, you need to pay attention to countable and uncountable nouns, and what to put with them. Keep going :) )
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Hi @RB5. I like your hobbies, they sound really fun! I only corrected half of the paragraph because it's a bit long and I have many things to do myself. I love anime as well, although I don't watch much of it anymore. Have a great day and keep enjoying those hobbies!
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My hobbies
Hello, today I will tell about my hobbies. My First hobby is to play games, I like it this because it helps me to coold down and they give me a festive feelihgsto me. The Game that I always play is Roblox because it have many styles of game and I am never bored y when play this game. My Second hobby is watch anime s because it give makes me a funny laugh and happy. Anime's have many of themes, some anime have fighting scenes or are mysterious. An anime that I like is Jojo Bizarre Adventure because it does not have a fighting only but it has mysteriies and uses flexibility to win defeat their enemies. Jojo Bizarre Adventure is about the Jostar family that receives ("I" before "E" except after "C") a boy named Dio Brando and he becomes a vampire by because of a stone mask and hijacks Jonathan Jostar's body. So, jostar family will hunt Dio for to eliminate him.Third hobby is collect models because went I watch animes and I found model of character that I like it, I will buy it. My favorite models are Gunpla line because it has many kind of detail in every models and it can custom to be own model by change colors or add a parts to make accessories or weapons. Fourth is cooking because my family have a own restaurant so, I will help my parents to cook a food. A food that I like to cook are somtam, omelets and, fried rice because I like to eat it and it delicious. Fifth is exercise because it help me healthy and strong. My exercise are doing by boxing, running and, hung bar. I do it by 4 day per weeks because I will cool down muscle, if I do every day my muscle will work hard and will hurt. So, this is my favorite hobbies that I like and I hope someone advice me in this paragraph.
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