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a small composition I'm a newcomer that I just joined the italki yesterday . I hope improve my English and use it like a native speaker at last. I have been studied a long time and I feel very hard. maybe I don't study hard.Hope I can stick up all long. today I helped some people modify several compositions in Chinese .I feel they are very great and almost not wrong.finally Hope we all can make progress each other and happy and rejoice

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A small Short Composition

I'm a newcomer that I who just joined the italki yesterday . I hope to improve my English and use it be able to speak and write like a native speaker at last. I have been studied for a long time and I feel it is a difficult journeyvery hard. maybe Perhaps I don't did study hard enough. Hope I can persist stick up all long the way.
Today I helped some people in modifying several compositions in Chinese. I feel they are very great the writing is good and almost error freenot wrong. Finally hope we all can make progress by helping each other. and happy and rejoice
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a small composition
A small composition

I'm a newcomer that I just joined the italki yesterday . I hope improve my English and use it like a native speaker at last. I have been studied a long time and I feel very hard. maybe I don't study hard.Hope I can stick up all long.
today I helped some people modify several
compositions in Chinese .I feel they are very great and almost not wrong.finally Hope we all can make progress each other and happy and rejoice

I'm a newcomer new, that I just joined the italki yesterday. I hope to improve my English and use it like a native speaker at last. I have been studied English for a long time and I feel find it very hard. Maybe I don't study hard enough. I hope I can stick to it for a up all long time.
Today I helped a few some people by modifying several compositions in Chinese. I feel thought they are very were great, and almost not wrong barely had any mistakes. Finally, I hope we all can all continue to make progress each other and be happy and rejoice in our learning.

My comments: Keep it up! I, too, can understand what you're saying - so please don't be discouraged by all the changes I've made. There are a millions ways to say things in English and there is no one right way. Just keep enjoying the process of learning and don't give up. :)
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a small composition

I'm a newcomer that just joined italki yesterday. I hope to improve my English and use it like a native speaker at last. I have studied for a long time and I feel that it is very hard. Maybe I don't study hard enough. I hope I can stick to it.
Today I helped some people modify several compositions in Chinese . I feel that they are great and almost not wrong. Finally, I hope we all can make progress, make each other happy, and rejoice.

Let me know if you'd like me to explain anything :) This is really impressive; English is a real beast of a language.

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