A Movie
The poor family managed to recruit all its members. They won the family trust. One day the family went on camping, and they had left the house empty apart from the maid as they thought. They didn't know that their house is going to be invaded by the poor family. That night was like a dream comes true for them. They started drinking alcohol and wished that one day the house would be theirs until the moment the doorbell rang. The mother answered the visitor through the intercom.
The visitor was the former maid. She begged the mother to allow her to enter the house because she claimed that she had forgotten something important after she left the house. The mother wairly and hesitantly allowed her to enter after the rest of her family had managed to hide.
To be continued!
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A Movie
The poor family managed to recruit all its members. They won the family’s trust. One day the family went on camping, and they had left the house empty apart from the maid as they thought. They didn't know that their house is was going to be invaded by the poor family. That night was like a dream comes come* true for them. They started drinking alcohol and wished that one day the house would be theirs until the moment the doorbell rang. The mother answered the visitor through the intercom.
The visitor was the former maid. She begged the mother to allow her to enter the house because she claimed that she had forgotten something important after she left the house. The mother wairly and hesitantly allowed her to enter after the rest of her family had managed to hide.
To be continued!
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* The correct sentence is “that night was like a dream come true” instead of “comes true” because the tense used isn’t simple present. It’s past participle. So “a dream come true”, in this case, means “a dream that has come true”.
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