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Letter - IELTS General Training - 14 - Test 1 Topic: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Dear Sir or Madam, I have seen a message in Australia Magazine that you are looking for a person who can live with your family and take care of your six-year-old girl during working days. I am writing to apply for this job. I will be in Australia for the next 5 months to participate in language courses in a community college. The language courses are scheduled in the evening every Monday to Thursday. My visa allows me to take some part-time jobs during day-time while taking the courses. I think I am a qualify candidate because I used to teach younger children whose ages are before the first school in my home country Taiwan, I also got a certificate for teaching young children, I get along with them very well. By the way, I plan to travel inside Australia during the weekend to explore the natural scenes. I am looking forward to hearing back from you! Yours faithfully, Diana C

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Letter - IELTS General Training - 14 - Test 1

Topic:
You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
• explain why you would like the job
• give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
• say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia


Dear Sir or Madam,

I have seen a message in Australia Magazine that you are looking for a person who can live with your family and take care of your six-year-old girl during working days. I am writing to apply for this job.

I will be in Australia for the next 5 months to participate in language courses in a community college. The language courses are scheduled in the evening every Monday to Thursday. My visa allows me to take some part-time jobs during the day-time while taking the courses.

I think I am a qualify qualified candidate because I used to teach younger children whose ages are before the first school in my home country Taiwan, I also got a certificate for teaching young children, I get along with them very well.

By the way, I plan to travel inside Australia during the weekend to explore the natural scenes. I am looking forward to hearing back from you!

Yours faithfully,
Diana C

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