Will the growth of online shopping one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing?
Some people believe that a current trend of more and more retail purchases through the internet will ultimately result in shutting down of all physical stores. I strongly disagree with this opinion, I think online shopping will improve our shopping experiences at physical stops.
Firstly, people usually tend to see and touch the real goods before paying for them. Most of the time we can only imagine what a real product will be like by watching pictures and videos online. If we really want to buy an unfamiliar product, we are likely to see the product first to verify our expectation. That can definitely save our time on returning unsuitable purchases due to false expectations.
Secondly, physical stores are convenient and gradually more competitive on price. A common and frustrative case for physical markets is that after people see the real goods and decide to buy, they go checking other available prices online right immediately via their mobile phone, and place an order online if the price is lower there. However, people will pay a higher price to get those goods at physical stores sometimes because they don’t want to wait one or two more days to get the goods delivered, they want to get the goods at once. In addition, some physical shops provide price deduction if customers show them the lower price online nowadays. Furthermore, it sounds easier to find a salesperson to bargain when people do shopping at physical markets rather than on shopping websites.
In conclusion, the growing trend of online purchasing seems not to threaten or reduce the demand of physical stores for these reasons that people usually prefer to see real goods before making an order and feel more convenient and more probably to get a better price at physical markets. In order words, the growth of online shopping will not lead to physical shops closing but encourage the physical ones to enhance their competitiveness in the future.
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Will the growth of online shopping one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing?
Some people believe that athe current trend of more and moreincreasing retail purchases through the internet will ultimately result in the shutting down of all physical stores. I strongly disagree with this opinion, as I think online shopping will improve our shopping experiences at physical stopsstores.
Firstly, people usually tend to prefer seeing and touching the real goods before paying for them. Most of the time, we can only imagine what athe real product will be like by watching pictures and videos online. If we really want to buy an unfamiliar product, we are likely to see the product in person first to verify our expectations. That can definitely save our time on returning unsuitable purchases due to false expectations.
Secondly, physical stores are more convenient and, graduallyincreasingly, more competitive on price. A common and frustrative casesource of frustration for physical markets is that after people see the real goods and decide to buy, they go immediately checking for other offersavailable prices online right immediately via their mobile phone, and place an order online if the price is lower there. However, people will sometimes pay a higher price to get those goods immediately at physical stores sometimes because they don’t want to wait one or two more days to get the goods delivered, they want to get the goods at once. In addition, some physical shops these days have a provide price deduction matching policy if customers show them thea lower price online nowadays. Furthermore, it soundsis easier to find a salesperson to bargain with when people do shopping at physical markets rather than on shopping websites.
In conclusion, the growing trend of online purchasing seemswill [Note: This is edit here is mainly stylistic. When writing an essay, you're making a case for opinion and not trying to make an observation. Thus, "seems" is not appropriate since it suggests that you don't believe in your argument.] not to threaten or reduce the demand of physical stores for these reasons stated above - that people usually prefer to see real goods before making an order, and physical stores can befeel more convenient and more probably to get apotentially lead to better prices at physical markets. In order words, the growth of online shopping will not lead to all physical shops closing but encourage the physical ones to enhance their competitiveness in the future.
Comments: Some edits were made for clarity and brevity. Please feel to let me know if you require an explanation for any of the edits.
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