My achievements at 28 years
A list of random things happened / realized during my last year in this world and in this mind:
- thank God I lived with my family during the lockdown or probably I would never have survived in my dream English flat (with tea bags);
- if I think a guy is funny as me, there is probably something wrong (how modest!);
- I can "climb" a "mountain" without losing my teeth (maybe not forever?);
- I can achieve a good level of English, but the words "thought" and "her" will be always the hardest words the pronounce;
- I still don't know how people can pronounce correctly the letter "r";
- or they can eat healthy without forcing themselves;
- okay, I eat broccoli and this "stuff" but come on guys, they are disgusting;
- having "happy new year" with couples in a mountain house is not so bad (even though you have a statue of a Madonna in your room looking at you. "Is it a sign? Thank God");
- you can be hired (with a permanent contract) during a lockdown while you are wearing you home clothes;
- carbs never lie and they will never leave you (literally);
- Frank Sinistra once said "you're riding high in April, shot down in May, but I know I'm gonna change that tune when I'm back on top, back on top in June", good for you Frank, but I am not you and I think I will wait next year for backing on top (if I am in a good mood);
- I can book a room with my own money;
- I still drive as at my first lesson (scared, without knowing what I am doing and hoping that people can get out of the car without parking);
- if something doesn't suit you, you can't force it, at least it's not a dress, in that case, as I did, i just add a piece of cloth, clever, isn't?!
- you can go to cinema alone without paranoia;
- I applied the eyeliner for the first time at the age of 28;
- I had my first Spanish call with my Spanish friend;
- I do like when people say that they think I am younger;
- It was nice seeing some people that made my days when I was in the UK;
- I found out I like theater in another languages even though I spend most of the time thinking "oh my God her/his is pronunciation is so good, why I am so bad?!" (they were English/Spanish mother tongue);
- If you are not nice as me we have a problem;
- Kobo and I spend good time while people socializing close us at the lake;
- Now that I am into Spanish, I like close a lot of things with "adios", so adios.
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My achievements at 28 years
A list of random things that happened or were realized during my last year in this world and in this mind:
- thank God I lived with my family during the lockdown or probably I would never have survived in my dream of an English flat (with tea bags);
- if I think a guy is funny as me, there is probably something wrong (how modest!);
- I can "climb" a "mountain" without losing my teeth (maybe not forever?);
- I can achieve a good level of English, but the words "thought" and "her" will be always be the hardest words the pronounce;
- I still don't know how people can pronounce correctly the letter "r";
- or they can eat healthy without forcing themselves;
- okay, I eat broccoli and this "stuff" but come on guys, they are disgusting;
- having" - experiencing a "happy New Year" with couples in a mountain house is not so bad (even though you have a statue of a Madonna in your room looking at you. "Is it a sign? Thank God");
- you can be hired (with a permanent contract) during a lockdown while you are wearing your home clothes;
- carbs never lie and they will never leave you (literally);
- Frank Sinatra once said "you're riding high in April, shot down in May, but I know I'm gonna change that tune when I'm back on top, back on top in June", good for you Frank, but I am not you and I think I will wait until next year to get back on top (if I am in a good mood);
- I can book a room with my own money;
- I still drive as bad as at my first lesson (scared, without knowing what I am doing and hoping that people can get out of the car without parking);
- if something doesn't suit you, you can't force it, at least, unless it's not a dress, in that case, as I did, i just add a piece of cloth, clever, isn't?! (Double punctuation leaves your reader worried!)
- you can go to cinema alone without paranoia;
- I applied the eyeliner for the first time at the age of 28;
- I had my first Spanish call with my Spanish friend;
- I do like when people say that they think I am younger;
- It was nice seeing some people that made my days when I was in the UK;
- I found out I like theater in another languages even though I spend most of the time thinking "oh my God her/his is pronouncing is so well, why I am so bad?!" (they were English/Spanish mother tongue);
- If you are not as nice as me we have a problem;
- Kobo and I spend good time while people socializing close us at the lake; (I don't understand this.)t
- Now that I am into Spanish, I like to close a lot of things with "adios", so adios.
If you had read your text out loud to yourself before posting it, practically all my corrections in bold would have disappeared. With a little more attention, you can do well. Depending on what you want to do, maybe I can help you as I'm doing with many others in Italy, China, Brazil and a few dozen other countries.
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My achievements at 28 years
A list of random things happened during my last year in this world and in this mind:
- thank God I lived with my family during the lockdown or probably I would never have survived in my dream English flat (with tea bags);
- if I think a guy is as funny as me, there is probably something wrong (how modest!);
- I can "climb" a "mountain" without losing my teeth (maybe not forever?);
- I can achieve a good level of English, but the words "thought" and "her" will be always the hardest words to pronounce;
- I still don't know how people can pronounce correctly the letter "r";
- or they can eat healthily without forcing themselves;
- okay, I eat broccoli and this "stuff" but come on guys, they are disgusting;
- having a "happy new year" with couples in a mountain house is not so bad (even though you have a statue of a Madonna in your room looking at you. "Is it a sign? Thank God");
- you can be hired (with a permanent contract) during a lockdown while you are wearing your home clothes;
- carbs never lie and they will never leave you (literally);
- Frank Sinistra* once said "you're riding high in April, shot down in May, but I know I'm gonna change that tune when I'm back on top, back on top in June". Good for you Frank, but I am not you and I think I will wait until next year to come back on top (if I am in a good mood);
- I can book a room with my own money;
- I still drive as in my first lesson (scared, without knowing what I am doing and hoping that people can get out of the car without parking);
- if something doesn't suit you, you can't force it, at least it's not a dress, in that case, as I did, i just add a piece of cloth, clever, amn't I?!
- you can go to cinema alone without paranoia;
- I applied eyeliner for the first time at the age of 28;
- I had my first Spanish call with my Spanish friend;
- I do like when people say that they think I am younger;
- It was nice seeing some people who made my days when I was in the UK;
- I found out I like theater in other languages even though I spend most of the time thinking "oh my God, their is pronunciation is so good, why I am so bad?!" (they were fluent English or Spanish speakers);
- If you are not nice as me, we have a problem;
- Kobo and I spend a good time together while people socializing close us at the lake;
- Now that I am into Spanish, I like to close a lot of things with "adios", so adios.
*Sinatra?
I didn't understand much of this.
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My achievements at 28 years
A list of random things that have happened or I have realized during my last year in this world and in this my mind:
- thank God I lived with my family during the lockdown or I probably would never have survived in my dream English flat (with tea bags);
- if I think a guy is as funny as me, there is probably something wrong (how modest!);
- I can "climb" a "mountain" without losing my teeth (maybe not forever?);
- I can achieve a good level of English, but the words "thought" and "her" will be always the hardest words the to pronounce;
- I still don't know how people can pronounce the letter "r" correctly;
- or how they can eat healthy without forcing themselves;
- okay, I eat broccoli and this "stuff," but come on guys, they are disgusting;
- having "happy new year" with couples in a mountain house is not so bad (even though you have a statue of a Madonna in your room looking at you. "Is it a sign? Thank God.");
- you can be hired (with a permanent contract) during a lockdown while you are wearing your home clothes;
- carbs never lie and they will never leave you (literally);
- Frank Sinatra once said, "you're riding high in April, shot down in May, but I know I'm gonna change that tune when I'm back on top, back on top in June," good for you Frank, but I am not you and I think I will wait until next year for coming back on top (if I am in a good mood);
- I can book a room with my own money;
- I still drive as if it is at my first lesson (scared, without knowing what I am doing and hoping that people can get out of the car without parking);
- if something doesn't suit you, you can't force it, at least it's not a dress, in that case, as I did, I just add a piece of cloth, clever, isn't it?!
- you can go to cinema alone without paranoia;
- I applied the eyeliner for the first time at the age of 28;
- I had my first Spanish call with my Spanish friend;
- I do like when people say that they think I am younger;
- It was nice seeing some people who made my days when I was in the UK;
- I found out I like theater in another languages even though I spend most of the time thinking "oh my God her/his is pronunciation is so good, why I am so bad?!" (they were English/Spanish native speakers);
- If you are not as nice as I am, then we have a problem;
- Kobo and I had a good time socializing with people at the lake;
- Now that I am into Spanish, I like to close a lot of things conversations with "adios," so adios.
Very good! You are a funny person.
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