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我喜欢踢足球
最近我大概每周都会在学院附近踢一次球,许多大学生每天都在那儿踢球。我已经踢了两个月了,累死了。
我喜欢踢足球
最近我大概每周踢一次足球. 我在学院附近玩. 许多大学生每天都玩. 两个月前, ( ?)又开始玩了. 我都快累死了.
我喜欢踢足球
最近我又开始踢足球了,约(or 大概|大约)每周一次。我玩在学院附近踢,每天都有许多大学生在那儿玩踢每天.。两个月前, 又开始玩了,我是从两个月前又开始踢足球的,每次踢完,我都累死了。
ps. Well done, Kellen. Pay attention to the following points:
1.According to Chinese grammar, adverbial of time usually take a front position to modify the whole sentence.
For example:
I take a walk to the park every day. = 每天我都去公园散步。= 我每天都去公园散步。
2.There are some differences between punctuation marks in English and Chinese.
For example: . (English) = 。(Chinese)
3.We usually use different verb to modify different sports.
For example:
play basketball = 打篮球 play football = 踢足球 play chess = 下棋 play the violin = 拉小提琴
我喜欢踢足球
最近我差不多每周都会去踢足球,一般在学院附件地。每天那里有很多大学生在哪玩。
我是从两个月前又开始玩的,感觉快累死了。
不知是不是你想表达的意思。呵呵
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