Why nobody modify edit my little short article?>.<

I have had written a 4 paged s of article , but nobody help me to modify correct it. I am changing and change write something different other now , I read a nice article ,and I found some nice good advice in it, I shall share them with you. now :

This golden cage may be valuable to you ; it is but not valuable to for the bird. The only thing valuable to For the bird is to be flying free in the sky is the only valuable thing in life .And the same This is true about for human beings too.

What do you think of it ? Love is  in the highest value most valuable thing in life.  It should not be reduced to stupid mere rituals.And Love and freedom go hand in hand together--you can t Can't choose one and leave over the other.

Why no one corrected your article.  You answered your own question.  It is 4 pages long!  No one has the time or the patience to go through it unless it is of great interest!  Try write something that is of common experience to us all.  As for your content, just one comment.  Every situation is different.  See if you can see this link to a classic American cartoon, http://toonheads.tv/view/1333/the-discontented-canary/

This cartoon is equivalent to "Too many times up the mountain, ye shall meet the tiger finally" 上得山多終遇虎.  Then there is also the saying, "Enter not the tiger's lair, how one catches its cub?" 不入虎穴焉得虎子.  So every situation is different.

Your punctuation spacing is atrocious.  See

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm

Why has nobody modified my little article? >.<    <--cute! but sad...I hope this helps.

I have written a 4 page article, but nobody has helped me to modify it. I'll write something else now.

I read a nice article and I found some nice sentences in it. I'll share them now: This golden cage may be valuable to you; it is not valuable to the bird. For the bird, to be free in the sky is the only valuable thing in life, and the same is true about human beings.

What do you think of it ? Love is the highest value in life: it should not be reduced to stupid rituals. And love and freedom go together -- you can't choose one and leave the other.