Last night
Last night, I dreamed that I was falling down from a high place.
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Last night
Last night, I dreamed that I was falling down from a high place. So, I woke up fast because I was scared. I thought: It was a dream! After this, I can´t couldn't (past tense) sleep more. Actually, my dreams are stranges (Note 1). I think that it´s this occurs because of that difficulty moment of Covid-19. The People (Note 2) are scared. It´s normal! Also after this episode, I prepared a delicious chocolate cake. But I didn´t use sugar. I prefer user to use cocoa without sugar. It´s a first better option than using sugar. It´s better to for our health. Also I prefer user to use oats. I put a little few strawberrys on the cake for to decorate it. It was perfect and very good! But I don´t like cooking. It happens sometimes (only) (Note 3). My mother loves cooking. She prepares pasta, pie, chicken, cakes and a traditional Brazilian food. She is pretty good! I love her plates. I will try to bring a recipe in next time. I am thinking it´s a good idea for learning new words. Today, also I worked at home, went to shopping to for my mother to help her and other things. Also I checked my emails and I sent messages to my colleagues. I watched TV with my mother for a few minutes. She loves to watch TV. I was very busy today. Tomorrow, I´m going to work at home. I´m going to clean up my home because tomorrow is Friday. Always on Fridays, we clean up the house. Now, I´m going to relax! It´s late here...almost midnight. I have to go now to bed! Thanks everyone and I'll (Note 4) see you here on Italki! Bye
You should have included a picture of the cake! Ha ha I made some Notes to explain my corrections.
1) "Strange" is an adjective, so it will always be singular (no "s" at the end) in English even when the noun that it modifies (dreams) is plural.
2) In English when we are writing about people in general, and not a specific group of people, we would not use the definite article "the".
3) I am not sure that I understood this sentence. Were you saying that you only cook once in a while (só de vez em quando)?
4) I'll = I will (future tense)
Bons estudos!
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