Could anyone correct my writing? Thanks in advance
Yesterday it had a huge riot on the streets and some shops were shattered while some citizens were whining, but they didn't want to give unleash of hatred that it was unload in this place. Unfulfilled among people was growing and the harsh cops dubbed their strain to contain to the protesters, that's why the streets have been awash with more cops. I pity about the situation but we need to seize the bull strongly.
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Could anyone correct my writing? Thanks in advance
Yesterday there was a huge riot in the streets and some shops were destroyed. As a result, citizens were crying in anguish from the hatred unleashed. Resentment from the people grew as the police used harsh tactics to control protesters. Although I feel bad about the situation, we need to take the bull by the horns.
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Could anyone correct my writing? Thanks in advance
Yesterday it had there was a huge riot in the streets and some shops were shattered destroyed. While some citizens were whining complaining, but they didn't want to give unleash of hatred vent their anger that it as was being let loose unload in this place. Unfulfilled Resentment among the people was growing and the harsh cops redoubled their strain efforts to contain to the protesters, that's why the streets have been awash with more cops. It is a pity about the situation, but we need to seize (or take/grab) the bull strongly by the horns.
Hola José María, no está mal.
There was - había
Whining - suena más como un niño - lloriquear. (Bueno, ¡quizás la gente se comportaba mal!)
En español, contener a las personas, pero en inglés, aunque "a" se traduce como "to", normalmente no se dice.
Bueno, espero que eso te ayude. Saludos desde Córdoba. Simón.
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