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about me
I was born in Hunan province on Dec.18. 1974。And nNow I live in shenzhen,Guangdong. It had been 10 years since I worked for this international freight forwarder forwarding companyies for 10 yeas in this city.
我于1974.12.18出生在湖南省。现居住在深圳。在这个城市,我为国际货运代理公司工作了10年之久。
I am active positive thinking, honest, loyal, kind-hearted, open, imaginative and being a bit romantic.
我很积极,真诚,忠心,善良,坦率,富于想象,还有一些罗曼蒂克。
I am keen on love reading book,writing the my diary, listening to music, mountain climbing the mountain, and practising Yoga.
我喜欢看书,写日记,听音乐,爬山,练瑜伽。
I love all kinds of music and movies.
我喜欢各种音乐和电影。
I like travelling and photography too.
我喜欢旅游和摄影。
I treasure love and friendhsip and love in my life.1 I like sharing share our storiers stories with family and friends. I'd like am willing to help those people who needed my assistance and whenever I can help am able to so.
我珍惜生命中的友谊和爱.我与家人和朋友分享着彼此的故事。我愿意帮助那些需要我帮助而且我有能力去帮助的人。
I am learning how to swim and practise Yoga. and I’d I would like to learn Hindi and Tamil. Also I am interested in learning to learn Spanish too and If possible, I’d like to learn more sports and languages.
我现在学习游泳和瑜伽。我想学印地语和泰米尔语。我对西班牙语也很感兴趣。如果有可能,我想学习更多的运动和语言。
On the other hand,my english is so so,and need to improve too.I do hope friends can correct my mistakes.
另一方面,我的英语一般般,也需要提高。我希望朋友们能帮忙更正我的错误。
By the way, I really do hope that I can find some friends who would like to share the experience same interest as I have of practising to practise Yoga with me.I am looking forward to their suggestions about practising on Yoga.
顺便说一下,我非常希望能遇到愿意与我分享练习瑜伽经验的朋友。我期盼着来自他们的有关练习瑜伽的建议。
It is great that you use Chinese as well. This makes correction so much easier.
1. Unlike Chinese, you don't need this in English. It is implied.
about me
I was born in Hunan province on Dec.18. 1974。Now I live in shenzhen,Guangdong. It had been 10 years since I worked for this international freight forwarding company.
我于1974.12.18出生在湖南省。现居住在深圳。在这个城市,我为国际货运代理公司工作了10年之久。
I am positive thinking, honest, loyal, kind-hearted, open, imaginative and being a bit romantic.
我很积极,真诚,忠心,善良,坦率,富于想象,还有一些罗曼蒂克。
I love reading,writing my diary, listening to music, mountain climbing, and practising Yoga.
我喜欢看书,写日记,听音乐,爬山,练瑜伽。
I love all kinds of music and movies.
我喜欢各种音乐和电影。
I like travelling and photography too.
我喜欢旅游和摄影。
I treasure love and friendhsip .I like sharing our stories with family and friends. I am willing to help those who needed my assistance whenever I am able to so.
我珍惜友谊和爱.我与家人和朋友分享着彼此的故事。我愿意帮助那些需要我帮助而且我有能力去帮助的人。
I am learning how to swim and practise Yoga. I would like to learn Hindi and Tamil. Also I am interested to learn Spanish too and If possible, I’d like to learn more sports and languages.
我现在学习游泳和瑜伽。我想学印地语和泰米尔语。我对西班牙语也很感兴趣。如果有可能,我想学习更多的运动和语言。
On the other hand,my english is so so,and need to improve.I do hope friends can correct my mistakes.
另一方面,我的英语一般般,也需要提高。我希望朋友们能帮忙更正我的错误。
By the way, I really do hope that I can find friends who share the same interest as I have to practise Yoga with me.I am looking forward to their suggestions on Yoga.
顺便说一下,我非常希望能找到有着共同兴趣,象我一样练习瑜伽的朋友。我期盼着来自他们的有关练习瑜伽的建议。
Remarks:
I was born in Hunan province on Dec.18. 1974。Now I live in shenzhen,Guangdong. It had been 10 years since I worked for this international freight forwarding company.
我于1974.12.18出生在湖南省。现居住在深圳。在这个城市,我为国际货运代理公司工作了10年之久。
It had been 10 years since I worked for this international freight forwarding company.
我为这个国际货运代理公司工作了10年之久。
But I’d like to express 我为国际货运代理公司工作了10年之久(并非一家公司,而是很多家公司)。Could I say,It had been 10 years since I worked for international freight forwarding companies?
about me
I was born in Hunan province on Dec.1974。And now I live in shenzhen,Guangdong. I worked for interrational freight forwarder companies for 10 yeas in this city.
我于1974年12月出生在湖南省。现居住在深圳。在这个城市,我为国际货运代理公司工作了10年之久。
I am active,honest and loyal, kind-hearted ,open,imaginative,romantic.
我很积极,真诚,忠心,善良,坦率,富于想象,还有一些罗曼蒂克。
I am keen on reading book,writing the diary,listening to music,climbing the mountain,practising Yoga.
我喜欢看书,写日记,听音乐,爬山,练瑜伽。
I love all kinds of music and movie.
我喜欢各种音乐和电影。
I like travel and photograph too.
我喜欢旅游和摄影。
I treasure friendhsip and love in my life.I share our storiers with family and friends. I'd like to help those people who need my assistance and I can help.
我珍惜生命中的友谊和爱.我与家人和朋友分享着彼此的故事。我愿意帮助那些需要我帮助而且我有能力去帮助的人。
I am learning swim and Yoga and I’d like to learn Hindi, Tamil.I am interested in learning Spanish too.If possible,I’d like to learn more sports and languages.
我现在学习游泳和瑜伽。我想学印地语和泰米尔语。我对西班牙语也很感兴趣。如果有可能,我想学习更多的运动和语言。
On the other hand,my english is so so,and need to improve too.I do hope friends can correct my mistakes.
另一方面,我的英语一般般,也需要提高。我希望朋友们能帮忙更正我的错误。
By the way, I do hope I can find some friends who would like to share the experience of practising Yoga with me.I am looking forward to their suggestion about practising Yoga.
顺便说一下,我非常希望能遇到愿意与我分享练习瑜伽经验的朋友。我期盼着来自他们的有关练习瑜伽的建议。
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