English writing practice (23 June)
1. I don't really believe testimonials, because sometimes they are fake.
2. Until a decade ago, if a criminal was a soldier, he had to be punished by the martial law.
3. Even though he attended some lessons of computer, he is still a tech dummy.
4. I should improve my learning curve and stop wasting time on web browsing.
5. You are already halfway to success, don't give up now!
My English writing practice for today.
Thanks for your kind help.
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English writing practice (23 June)
1. I don't really believe testimonials because sometimes they are fake.
2. Until a decade ago, if a criminal was a soldier he had to be punished by martial law.
3. Even though he attended some lessons in computing he is still a tech dummy.
4. I should improve my learning curve and stop wasting time on web browsing.
5. You are already halfway to success, don't give up now!
My English writing practice for today.
Thanks for your kind help.
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English writing practice (23 June)
1. I don't really believe testimonials, because sometimes they are fake.
2. Until a decade ago, if a criminal was a soldier, he had to be punished by the martial law. [the term “martial law” does not typically require the article in front of it, and it should probably read "under martial law"]
3. Even though he attended [“took” would probably be a better word choice than "attended" in this particular context] some lessons of computer training, he is still a tech dummy.
4. I should improve my learning curve and stop wasting time on web browsing. [to my ear the term “learning curve” sounds a big strange in this context, but technically the sentence works]
5. You are already [“already” feels a bit redundant or unnecessary here; I would suggest deleting it altogether] halfway to success, don't give up now!
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