A picture
I saw a picture on the front cover of a book. The picture describes the landscape of hills.
There is a brook flows through the hills. In the middle of the brook, a lot of rocks lie there.
The hills stand on both sides of the brook. One side is steep, there are many big trees on the hillside. The other side is gentle, there are also many trees. A herdsman stands under a tree with his sheep. In a distance, several wooden houses lie on the hill, and a mill stands near the top of the hill.
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A picture
I saw a picture on the front cover of a book. The picture shows a landscape of hills.
There is a brook flowing through the hills. There are a lot of rocks lying in the middle of the brook.
The hills stand on both sides of the brook. One side is steep, and there are many big trees on the hillside. The other side is gentle and also has many trees. A shepherd is standing under a tree with his sheep. In the distance, there are several wooden houses on a hill, and there is a mill near the top of the hill.
---your articles (the and a/an) are good: well done!
---stream is a more common word than brook. Shepherd is a more common word than herdsman.
---"there is / are" is a good structure to use when you are describing things.
For example: There is a stream flowing through the hills. / There is a stream which is flowing through the hills. / There is a man looking after his sheep. / There is a man who is looking after his sheep ...
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The picture describes the landscape of the hills; The picture shows the landscape of the hills.
There is a brook flows through the hills; There is a brook that flows through the hills.
In the middle of the brook, a lot of rocks lie there; In the middle of the brook, lay many rocks.
The hills stand on both sides of the brook; The hills rise above both sides of the brook.
One side is steep, there are many big trees on the hillside; One side is steep, with many big trees covering the hillside.
The other side is gentle, there are also many trees.; The other side is more gentle, there are also many trees.
In the distance, there are several wooden houses on the hill, and a mill stands near the top of the hill.
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