English writing practice (20 June) 1. Language and culture differences are the biggest hurdles of interracial marriages. 2. Many interracial couples keep long-distance relationship. 3. I always have w

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English writing practice (20 June) 1. Language and culture differences are the biggest hurdles of interracial marriages. 2. Many interracial couples keep long-distance relationship. 3. I always have willingness to work, but not to cook. 4. This course provides a roadmap for students to prepare and pass the exam. 5. Is being prosperity and successful your dream? My English writing practice for today. Thanks for your kind help.

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Just an alternative to Natalia. That is, her suggestion is great, this is just a different possibility.

2. Many interracial couples keep long-distance relationships.

OR Many interracial couples remain in long-distance relationships.

"relationships" needs to be plural to match with "couples".

Of course, "remain" has a different meaning to "keep", "have" and "are in".

Well, it has a slight overlap with "keep".

Natalia's suggestion would be the more usual meaning.

English writing practice (20 June)

1. Language and culture differences are the biggest hurdles of interracial marriages.

2. Many interracial couples ~~keep~~ are in long-distance relationships.

3. I am always willing ~~have willingness~~ to work, but not to cook.

4. This course provides a roadmap for students to prepare and pass the exam.

5. Is being ~~prosperity~~ prosperous and successful your dream?

My English writing practice for today.

Thanks for your kind help.

sentence n. 2: you would either ommit the article and use a plural noun, like i've suggested here (long distance relationships), or use an article + singular (a long distance relationship). I'm not completely sure, but I think the more adequate verb here would be to be in a long distance relationship or to have a long distance relationship, from what I've seen of exemples on google.
sentence n. 3: the verb would be "to be willing to do something", instead of having willingess to
sentence n. 5: prosperity, unlinke succesful, is a noun. in order to make your sentence cohesive, you can either use two adjectives (prosperous and succesful) or two nouns (are prosperity and success your dream?)

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