My day
I woke up today at 9:00 a.m. Tonight, I slept late because I studyed a lot. Today, I pretend studying English and learning more. Now, I´m trying write about anything. After I woke up, I looked at my cell phone to check my messages. So, I went to the bathroom and I washed my face. To coffee morning, I drank a coffee with sugar and I ate a piece of bread. Now, I´m lunching. For lunch, we have rice, beans, pie, carrot, tomato and corn. I drank an orange juice. My mother went buy a book for me next to your house and I´m here in my house. Close to our house, there is a church and a square. Sometimes I´m going to square and I´m looking for to trees and birds. I love look for nature. Today, the day is wonderful and beautiful. The sun is brighting. My mother arrived here now. She washed her hands and now she gonig to wash the dishes. I´m going to wash my deeths and after I´m going to work. I will have an English classes at 2 p.m. I hope to learn new vocabulary. So, that is!
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My day
I woke up today at 9:00 a.m. Last night, I slept late because I studied a lot. Today, I pretend am trying to studying English and learning more. Now, I´m trying to write about anything. After I woke up, I looked at my cell phone to check my messages. So Then, I went to the bathroom and I washed my face. To coffee (I went to a café?) this morning, I drank had a coffee with sugar and I ate had a piece of bread. Now, I´m having lunching. For lunch, we have rice, beans, pie, carrot, tomato and corn. I drank had an some orange juice. My mother went to buy a book for me, next (next? - at the side of her house. near - not far from her house) to your her house and I´m here in my house at home. Close to our house, there is a church and a square. Sometimes I´m going to the square and I´m looking for to at the trees and birds. I love looking at for nature. Today, the day is wonderful and beautiful. The sun is brighting (or "shining"). My mother has just arrived come back here now. She washed her hands and is now she going to wash the dishes. I´m going to wash brush my teeths and after that, I´m going to work. I will have an English classes at 2 p.m. I hope to learn new vocabulary. So, that is it!
Olá Andressa, not too bad.
Please don't worry about errors - we can learn from them.
Note that when we talk about our house, we say "at home". We don't need to say my, because we know it is ours. Also, we say "at" and not "in", because we're not talking about being inside a physical building, just generally the play where we live.
Be careful with the present and continuous verb forms. Present is usually something we do all the time, as a habit or custom. Continuous is what we are doing only in this moment. "Sometimes I go to the square," is a habit. "Now I'm having lunch," at this moment. Note, "I love looking at nature," is an activity.
Keep practicing! Simón.
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My day
I woke up today at 9:00 a.m. Tonight Last night, I slept late because I studied a lot. Today, I pretend studying intend to study (Note 1) English and learning more. Now, I´m trying to write about anything. After I woke up, I looked at my cell phone to check my messages. So Then, I went to the bathroom and I washed my face. For breakfast To coffee morning, (Note 2) I drank a coffee with sugar and I ate a piece of bread. Now, I´m having lunch lunching. For lunch, we have rice, beans, pie, carrot, tomato and corn. I drank an orange juice. My mother went to buy a book for me next to your her (Note 3) house and I´m here in my house. Close to our house, there is a church and a square. Sometimes I´m going I go to the square and I´m looking I look at for to trees and birds. (Note 4) I love to look for at nature. Today, the day is wonderful and beautiful. The sun is brighting shining. My mother has just arrived here now (Note 5). She washed her hands and now she is going to wash the dishes. I´m going to wash my deeths brush my teeth (Note 6) and after that I´m going to work. I will have an English classes at 2 p.m. I hope to learn new vocabulary. So, that is it!
Good job with your text! I have some notes to help you understand the corrections.
1) "Pretender fazer alguma coisa" in Portuguese would be translated as "to intend to do something". The word "pretend" exists in English, but it has other meanings and should not be used in this context.
2) It looks like you translated "cafe da manhã" into English one word at a time. Sorry, that does not work. The morning meal is called breakfast in English.
3) When an English-speaking reader sees the words "your house" he will think that you are saying "a tua casa" or "a casa de você". He will not understand this to mean a house that belongs to another person. So, to refer to the house that belongs to your mother, you should say "her house".
4) See the helpful comments from Simón Wheeler about the present and continuous verb forms.
5) "My mother has just arrived" is the way that we say "A minha mãe acabou de chegar"
6) Remember that "tooth" is singular, "teeth" is plural and "teeths" does not exist.
Bons estudos!
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My day
I woke up today at 9:00 a.m. Last night, tonight, I went to bed slept late because I studied a lot. Today, I will pretend try to study studying English and learn ing more. Now, I'm trying write about anything. After I woke up, I looked at my cell phone to check my messages. Then, so, I went to the bathroom and I washed my face. To coffee morning, In the morning, I drank a coffee with sugar and I ate a piece of bread. Now, I´m lunching I'm having lunch. For lunch, we have rice, beans, pie, carrot, tomato and corn. I drank an orange juice. My mother went to buy a book for me next to your house and I´m here in my house. Close to our house, there is a church and a square. Sometimes I´m going I go to the square and I´m looking I look for to trees and birds. I love look for nature. Today, the day weather is wonderful and beautiful. The sun is bright. brighting. My mother has arrived here now. She washed her hands and now she going to wash the dishes. I'm going to wash my deeths brush my teeth and after I'm going to work. I will have an English class es at 2 p.m. I hope to learn new vocabulary. So, that is it!
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