Can someone please proofread my article?
The Majority of people tend to find an easier and quicker way to get things done. However, according to the article, humans are not made to do as little as possible, and in reality they thrive when they are busy. Furthermore, humans can’t resist themselves from accomplishing their goals and find doing nothing at all very hard. They may enjoy lazying around for a while, but in the long-run, it affects their mood and makes them uneasy and grumpy.
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Can someone please proofread my article?
Most people tend to find an easier and quicker way to get things done. However, according to the article, humans are not meant to do as little as possible, and in reality they thrive when they are busy. Furthermore, humans can’t resist themselves from (or can't stop themselves from) accomplishing their goals and find doing nothing at all very hard. They may enjoy lazing around for a while, but in the long run it affects their mood and makes them uneasy and grumpy.
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Can someone please proofread my article?
The majority of people tend to find an easier and quicker way to get things done. However, according to the article, it is against human nature to do as little as possible, and in reality, most of them thrive when they are busiest. Furthermore, humans have a hard time stopping themselves from accomplishing their goals, and conversely, find doing nothing at all very hard. Granted, they may enjoy lazing around for a short while, but in the long-run, it affects their mood by making them uneasy and grumpy.*
Hi, Jam. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to hopefully clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
*Other than the capitalization of the word, majority, and the misspelling of the word, lazying, I did not see much wrong with your original. However, a few of the sentences were awkwardly worded, thus, my changes.
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