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Plz correct it Choose a person that you admire and say why you admire the person. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Everyone has someone in their life that admire them .depends on the major maybe we appreciate lots of people. Generally, I admire my uncle so that he has adequate self-confidence for his goals. When he was a teenager decided to migrate to London without any support, he accepted that no one can help him to be successful in the world except himself. His parents wholly disagreed with his decide But he continues his way. He changed his major and struggle with a new issue. He had worked full time for getting by. Finally, he achieved his purpose with hard-working and nowadays he lives in convenience circumstances Totally I admire him to his perseverance and determination also one of the best points that I can mention about his character is he tries to be the best person in his life he is a super forgiving person. Maybe I cant say his my roll model but definitely I try to be as successful as him

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Choose a person that you admire and say why you admire the person. Justify your answer in detail.
Everyone has someone in their life who they admire. It depends on the major, but maybe we appreciate lots of people.
Generally, I admire my uncle because he has adequate self-confidence for his goals.
When he was a teenager, he decided to migrate to London without any support, he accepted that no one can help him to be successful in the world except himself.
His parents disagreed with his decision.
But he continued his way.
He changed his major and struggled with a new problem.
He had worked full time for getting by. I don't understand this sentence. What do you mean?
Finally, he achieved his goal with hard-working and nowadays he lives in convenient circumstances .
In conclusion, I admire him to his perseverance and determination. Also, one of the best points that I can mention about his character is he tries to be the best person in his life he is a super forgiving person.
Maybe I can't say that he is my role model but definitely I try to be as successful as him.
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Choose a person that you admire and say why you admire the person. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Everyone has someone in their life whom they admire. It might depend on your university major, but maybe we generally admire many people.
Generally, I admire my uncle because he is confident in himself and his goals.
When he was a teenager, he decided to migrate to London without any support. He accepted that no one could help him to be successful in the world except himself.
His parents wholly disagreed with his decision, but he continued anyway.
He changed his major and struggled with a new issues.
He had worked full time to get by. You can also say "He worked full time to make ends meet." This is a common English phrase.
Eventually, he achieved his goal by working hard. Nowadays, he lives comfortably.
Totally I admire him to my uncle's perseverance and determination. My uncle is also tirelessly forgiving, and tries to be the best person that he can be. in his life he is a super forgiving person.
Maybe I cant say he's my role model, but I'll definitely try to be as successful as he is. I don't understand this last sentence -- if you want to be as successful as your uncle is, then, by definition, you are using him as a role model. You can cut down on the words and still sound confident in your writing. I would've written this:

"I don't know if I'll be as successful as my uncle. But I'm definitely going to try."

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