Conveyor belt sushi
I went to conveyor belt sushi with my family. We wanted to avoid a crowded time, so we arrived 10 min before the opening of the restaurant. However, some people already waited. There are a lot of the style sushi restaurants in Japan, and they are really popular for family and young people because of the price. Fortunately, we got our table without waiting time. We ate 21 dishes of sushi only 3 people. My favorite sushi is salmon cheese: cheese is covered on the salmon sushi and broiled. As it's really tasty, when you come here you should try it :) I felt more delicious because it was been a while since I went there the last time.
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Hi Haru. See the corrections below. I'll leave some feedback at the end of the message. All the best, Peter.
Conveyor belt sushi
I went to the conveyor belt sushi restaurant [1] with my family. We wanted to avoid a crowded time, so we arrived 10 minutes [2] before the opening of the restaurant opened. However, some people were already waiting waited [3]. There are a lot of the style sushi restaurants of this style in Japan, and they are really popular for family and young people because of the price. Fortunately, we got our table without needing to waiting time. We ate 21 dishes of sushi only 3 people. My favorite sushi is salmon cheese: cheese is placed on the salmon sushi and broiled. As it's really tasty, when you come here you should try it :) It felt (even) more delicious because it had been a while since I went there the last time.
Really good work, Haru. Here are some points to think about:
[1]: If you say that you went to conveyor belt sushi, it sounds like you went to a city/town or a restaurant with that exact name. Don't forget to use "the" when talking about a specific place which you don't name.
[2] Also, when you're writing something informal it's fine to say "10m" or "10 min" but if it's supposed to be a little more formal you should write the full word.
[3]: Be careful with the difference between the past simple and the past continuous. Think about it: are the people still waiting (when you arrive) or have the people gone inside (after waiting for some time but before you arrive)?
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