about me I’m Sofia, I am 32 years old. I am civil engineer and I was study in the UTN in Santa Fe, city where I was born. I´ve lived in Colombia for 2 years. It was an exciting experience. I had live

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Sofi Spedaletti

about me I’m Sofia, I am 32 years old. I am civil engineer and I was study in the UTN in Santa Fe, city where I was born. I´ve lived in Colombia for 2 years. It was an exciting experience. I had lived in Bogota for 3 month and then I have moved to Medellin, the city of the eternal spring. I really miss to live there because the weather is perfect, although is very rainy, is hot all long year and is too near to the paradise, the magical beaches of Colombia. On vacations or in my free time I was travel to the beach, my favorite place in the world, especially Cartagena. I think is the best town in Colombia, it have a great places to visit, the best sunset I have ever seen and a lot of turist, but the perfect sea is in San Andrés. Now I am living in Buenos Aires, unfortunately far away to the beach, and I work in a multinational company. I like my job and I want to grow up there. I like going to the gym, running, watching series on tv and go out with my friends, especially on weekend we are going to brunch and then visit different coffee shops. My goal is to be bilingual and I would like to live in some country where the English is the native language for a couple of month to practice my knowledges.

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about me

I’m Sofia, I am 32 years old. I am civil engineer and I was study in studied at the UTN in Santa Fe, the city where I was born.

(Because this next paragraph talks about experiences that are completely in the past (a chapter of your life that has ended), I switched the verb tenses to the preterit. For example, ¨I have lived in Colombia¨ suggests the possibility that you continue to live there, but saying ¨I lived in Colombia¨ makes it clear that this experience already ended).

I´ve I lived in Colombia for 2 years. It was an exciting experience. I had lived in Bogota for 3 months and then I have moved to Medellin, the city of the eternal spring. I really miss to live living there because the weather is (¨was¨) perfect -- although it is (¨was¨) very rainy, it is (¨was¨) hot all long year long and it is (¨was¨) too near to the paradise almost paradise at the magical beaches of Colombia. On vacations or in my free time, I was traveled to the beach, my favorite place in the world, especially Cartagena. I think Cartagena is the best town in Colombia, it have a has great places to visit, the best sunset I have ever seen and a lot of turist tourists -- but the perfect sea is in San Andrés.

Now I am living in Buenos Aires, unfortunately far away to from the beach. and I work in a multinational company. I like my job and I want to grow up there maybe ¨develop my career there¨ or ¨continue to live in Buenos Aires¨ or ¨put down roots in Buenos Aires.¨

I like going to the gym, running, watching series on TV and going out with my friends, especially on weekends. We are going go to brunch and then visit different coffee shops.

My goal is to be bilingual and I would like to live in some country where the English is the native (or ¨main¨) language for a couple of months to practice my knowledges English speaking skills.

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Hello Sofia, I normally don´t write corrections when someone has already received one or two corrections. However, in this case I thought it was necessary. I see a situation where people had the best of intentions when they edited your notebook, but I noticed they made some mistakes of their own -- and that might confuse you.

Green shows words that should be added. Red shows words that should be erased. Yellow is for optional changes, suggestions and comments

When you said that Colombia is hot all year long, at first I thought that was going to be a negative thing (like being rainy is negative). Maybe that is my bias because I don´t like hot weather, ha ha. After I read the rest of the sentence, I realized that you probably meant that hot weather is a good thing :-) . If you want to make it more clear to your reader what your opinion is of the hot weather, you could add a descriptive word, such as ¨wonderfully hot¨ (or perhaps ¨uncomfortably hot¨ if you view it negatively).

¨put down roots¨ means that you want to make a place your home for the long term -- when you don´t want to be just a visitor but can imagine staying for many years, making friends, building a whole life there.

If you have any questions about any of the changes I have suggested, please feel free to write a comment here or send me a personal message. Welcome to iTalki, Sofia!

about me

I’m Sofia, I am 32 years old. I am a civil engineer and I was studying at the UTN in Santa Fe, city where I was born.

I´ve lived in Colombia for 2 years. It was an exciting experience. I had lived in Bogota for 3 months and then I ~~have~~ moved to Medellin, the city of the eternal spring. I really miss to living there because the weather was perfect, although it would be very rainy, it was hot through out the whole year and it seemed too near to ~~the~~ paradise, the magical beaches of Colombia. On vacations or in my free time I ~~was~~ went to the beach, my favorite place in the world, especially Cartagena. I think it is the best town in Colombia, it have visited great places , the best sunset I have ever seen and a lot of tourists, but the perfect sea is in San Andrés.

Now I am living in Buenos Aires, unfortunately far away from the beach, and I work in a multinational company. I like my job and I want to grow up here.

I like going to the gym, running, watching series on tv and going out with my friends, especially on the weekends, we ~~are~~ go~~ing~~ to brunch and then visit different coffee shops.

My goal is to be bilingual and I would like to live in some country where ~~the~~ English is the native language for a couple of month to practice my knowledges.

I give you eight out of ten.

Your English is good but there are some grammatical mistakes as well as a spelling mistake.

You just need to fix your grammatical mistakes. You have good amount of words or vocabulary to express.

Good effort and a nice story. Keep up the good work

about me

I’m Sofia, I am 32 years old. I am a civil engineer studied in the UTN in Santa Fe.

I have lived in Colombia for 2 years. It was an exciting experience. I have lived in Bogota for 3 months and then moved to Medellin, the city of the eternal spring. I really miss that place because the weather used to be perfect, although is very rainy sometimes, is hot all long year and is too near to the paradise, the magical beaches of Colombia. On vacations or in my free time I travel to the beach. My favorite place in the world is Cartagena. I think is the best town in Colombia, it has great places to visit, the best sunset I have ever seen and a lot of tourists come there, but the perfect sea is in San Andrés.

Now I am living in Buenos Aires, unfortunately far away to the beach, and I work in a multinational company. I like my job and I want to uplift my career there.

I like going to the gym, running, watching series on TV and go out with my friends, especially on weekend we are going to brunch and then visit different coffee shops.

My goal is to be bilingual and I would like to live in some country where the English is the native language for a few months in order to practice my english.

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