Washington Square
The book Washington Square by Henry James tells the story of Catherine, a doctor's young daughter whose wife had died when Catherine was a child. Her mother had left a great fortune that she was supposed to own and her father himself had saved a lot of money from his work as years past. At 21 years old, she met a suspicious handsome young man who has no work. They started seeing each other but her father did not like it at all. As the they got to know one another, the doctor tried hard to prove to the young lady that the man she wanted was in fact a lazy and selfish person only interested in her money.
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Washington Square
The book, Washington Square, by Henry James, tells the story of Catherine, the young daughter of a doctor whose wife had died when Catherine was only a child. Her mother had not only left her a great fortune as an inheritance, but her father himself was quite wealthy from his work in years past. When Catherine turned twenty-one years old, she met a handsome, but suspicious young man who was unemployed. They started seeing each other, but her father did not care for their relationship at all. As Catherine's feelings for him grew deeper, the doctor tried hard to prove to his daughter that the man she wanted was, in fact, a lazy and selfish person, and one who was only interested in her for her money.*
Hi, Idenilton. Good job! Whatever changesI made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
*For titles of books, magazines, movies, etc., you need to italicize them, or put them in quotation marks.
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Hi, very well written. I think I will read it.
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