Social Practice of College Students
In recent years, more and more university leaders not only value student's academic record, but also care for their social practical ability. Every university organize students to participate in social practical
activities during holiday.
There is no doubt that those activities will pose a variety of positive consequences. First and foremost, social practical activities can cultivate student's the sense of responsibility.
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Social Practices of College Students
In recent years, more and more university leaders not only value their students' academic record, but also care about the development of their practical social skills. As a result, every university typically organizes students to participate in social activities during the holidays. There is no doubt that those activities will result in a variety of positive consequences, but foremost among these are that practical social activities can cultivate a student's sense of responsibility.*/**
Hi, Yang. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
*student’s = singular possessive, but, students’ = plural possessive—As you later used, “their,” I changed it to match. However, if you meant it to be singular, you should put an “a” before “student’s,” as well as change “their” to “his or her.”
Thus, “In recent years, more and more university leaders not only value a student’s academic record, but also care about the development of his or her practical social skills.”
**There was no real connection between your final two sentences. It would be better to join the ideas together within one sentence as I have done above, or to use a colon (:), or a hyphen (—) after “consequences” as the text that follows, explains it.
Thus, “There is no doubt that those activities will result in a variety of positive consequences:/—the foremost being that practical social activities can cultivate a student's sense of responsibility.
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Social Practice of College Students
In recent years, more and more university leaders not only value student's academic record, but also care for their social practical ability (but also value their social skills). Every university organizes students (student events) to participate in social practical
activities during holiday.
There is no doubt that those activities will pose a variety of positive consequences (those activities will benefit the class) First and foremost, social practical activities can cultivate student's the sense of responsibility.
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