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Could you help me with my grammar and punctuation please? RECOMMENDATIONS I believe that as a society we can help improve the situation by staying at home go out only for the essentials because by taking care of ourselves we take care of others.

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Could you help me with my grammar and punctuation please?

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I believe that as a society we can help improve the situation by staying at home, and going out only for the essentials, because by taking care of ourselves we take care of others.
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Could you help me with my grammar and punctuation please?

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I believe that as a society we can help improve the situation by staying at home go out only for the essentials because by taking care of ourselves we take care of others.

*In general, commas are placed where you’d take a pause while reading, so really it depends on your style and how you want it to be read. In my opinion, there are very few rules about punctuation but I’m sure there are people who would disagree with me.
So I’d write:
I believe that, as a society, we can help improve the situation by staying at home. Go out only for the essentials, because by taking care of ourselves we take care of others.
 
Hope that helps Yaneli! If you have any questions, please let me know. Could you correct a few of my last sentences in my notebook entry please? I’d really appreciate it!

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I believe that, as a society, we can help improve the situation by staying at home and only going out for the essentials because by taking care of ourselves we take care of others.
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Could you help me with my grammar and punctuation please?

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I believe that as a society we can help improve the current situation by staying at home, and only going outside for essential needs, as by taking care of ourselves first, we also take care of others.

Hi, Yaneli. This is how I would write it. I hope this helps you, Jonathan.
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I believe that we--as a society--can reduce the impact of the virus by staying home and only going out for essentials. By taking care of ourselves, we are caring for others.

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