About my dog
First of all, I realized than there are only two posts available in one day 😭
I have a dog. She is toy-terrier and her name is Mika. She is a very small and tiny. When I wished a dog, I hope, than she would be mannerly, ans now she is 👍But also this can be possible only with hard work. This breed is very emotional, she is trembling from the noize, food, paper garbage on the floor 🤣 Also she barks to the stranger on the street, and it's make me shame 🤦♀️But I always love her so much.
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About my dog
First of all, I realized than there are only two posts available in one day 😭
I have a dog. She is toy-terrier and her name is Mika. She is a very small and tiny. When I wished (I had) a dog, I hope(d), than(t) she would be mannerly (well-behaved), ans now she is 👍But also this can (only) be possible only achieved ("possible" is fine, but achived sounds better with "with") with hard work. This breed is very emotional (sensitve - gets sad easily; easily frightened - gets scared easily), she is trembling from the noize (trembles when she hears loud noises like when) food, paper and garbage on (hit) the floor 🤣 Also she barks to the (at) stranger(s) on the street, and it's make(s) me (a)shame(d) 🤦♀️But I (will) always love her so (very - "so" doesn't collocate with "always" here) much.
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About my dog
First of all, I realized that there are only two posts available in one day 😭
I have a dog. She is toy-terrier and her name is Mika. She is a very small and tiny. When I wished for a dog, I hoped that she would be well-behaved mannerly, and now she is. 👍But also this can be possible only with hard work. This breed is very emotional, she is trembles from the noise, food, paper, and garbage on the floor. 🤣 Also she barks to the at strangers on the street, and it embarasses me.'s make me shame 🤦♀️But I still always love her so much.
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