Essay Baikal
Last winter I traveled to the most amazing place I have ever been-Lake Baikal.
Baikal is the largest lake in Siberian Russia.There is fresh water and it's cold even in summer.
Lake freezes in winter,so you can walk on ice,skate,drive by car and even build the house on the lake.You can't see this crystal clear ice anywhere.
The place is developed for tourism.There are many hostels,cafes,open-air markets on the coast,where you can relax and enjoy fresh air.
Unfortunately,there is very windy,so you have to wear more warm clothes.
Generally,it is very beautiful and wonderful place,which you will get a large charge of forces and energy.
Necessarily, you have to be here!
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Essay on Lake Baikal
Last winter I traveled to the most amazing place I have ever been - Lake Baikal.
Baikal is the largest lake in Siberian Russia.There is It has fresh water and it's cold even in summer.
The lake freezes in winter, so you can walk on the ice,skate, drive on the ice by car and even build a the house on the lake. You can't see this crystal clear ice anywhere else.
The area has been place is developed for tourism.There are many hostels, cafes, and open-air markets along the shores on the coast,where you can relax and enjoy the fresh air.
Unfortunately, there it is very windy, so you have to wear more warm clothes.
Generally, it is a very beautiful and wonderful place, which where you will get a large charge of forces and energy. ??
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Essay on Baikal
Last winter I traveled to the most amazing place I have ever been to -Lake Baikal.
Baikal is the largest lake in Siberian Russia. It is fresh water and cold even in summer.
The lake freezes in winter, so you can walk on ice, skate, drive a car on it and even build a house on the lake. You cannot see this crystal clear ice anywhere else*.
The place is developed for tourism. There are many hostels, cafes, open-air markets on the coast, where you can relax and enjoy the fresh air.
Unfortunately, it is very windy, so you have to wear warm clothes.
Generally, it is a very beautiful and wonderful place, which will revitalise you with a large charge of force and energy.
Absolutely you have to be here!
*If this was your meaning?
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Essay Baikal
Last winter I traveled to the most amazing place I have ever been-Lake Baikal.
Baikal is the largest lake in Siberian Russia.There is fresh water and it's cold even in summer.
(the) Lake (or, if you don't want to use "the", say the name of the lake again) freezes in winter,so you can walk on ice,skate,drive by car and even build the (a - since it is not a specific house) house on the lake.You can't see ("find" instead of "see"might be more appropriate here!) this crystal clear ice anywhere.
The place is developed (suitable instead of developed? maybe, perfect?) for tourism. There are many hostels, cafes (and) open-air markets on the coast, where you can relax and enjoy fresh air.
Unfortunately, there is very windy (there is a lot of wind OR it is very windy), so you have to wear more (cut "more" out) warm clothes.
Generally (overall? Generally sounds like "in a general way" and I think you mean "in all ways" - if you mean to keep it, say "Generally speaking"), it is (a) very beautiful and wonderful place, which (where, because you're talking about the place, right?) you will get a large charge (dose OR boost may sound better) of forces and energy.
Necessarily (I'm not sure if this is wrong, but it surely sounds weird! how about "Finally" or "In my opinion"?), you have to be (visit - instead of be) here (Baikal)!
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