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Oh, no! This guy writes again... Part 3 Hi there! I know, I promised to tell you about an animation movie. It will be soon but now I’ll show you one song and translate it for you, of course. I will try to translate it very accurate but some words can’t be translated so easily. I’ll explain some stuff later in the comments. Let’s start. It’s the song “Павел Пламенев - То, что ты не успел”. You can listen to it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LslIa_nJ_cA Something you have no time to do anymore* Law of gravity was explained a long time ago But why we still want to high in the sky? Someone rises, it happens sometimes But they will fall and will be forgotten. You came off of them and went to the shadow. There are many wrong stars. It’s easy to be one of them. You reached very high. It’s impossible to fall from there. Chorus 1: The last hero is on the other riverside**. Not only for me you became a bright star. I keep your sing in my heart, And I will finish the song for you. Acts of geniuses can’t be explained, But History remembers those and we are judged by them. The people are dying out, they become the foam***. Is there someone who can replace them? Doesn’t matter where you are, even doesn’t matter who you are. Do your work honestly, do everything perfectly. Then the sky will burn like a supernova To be with us forever. Chorus 2: The last hero is on the other riverside. For him and me, you became a bright star. I keep your sing in my heart, And we will finish the song for you. Chorus 3: The last hero is on the other riverside. I follow you. I will collect everything you can’t anymore, And I will finish the song for you. Thank you for reading, thank you for your corrections. I appreciate every help. See you soon!

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Oh, no! This guy writes again... Part 3

Hi there! I know, I promised to tell you about an animation movie (I think more often, you would use "animated movie"). It will be soon but now I’ll show you one song and translate it for you, of course. I will try to translate it very accurately but some words can’t be translated so easily. I’ll explain some stuff later in the comments. Let’s start. It’s the song “Павел Пламенев - То, что ты не успел”. You can listen to it here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LslIa_nJ_cA

Something you have no time to do anymore*

Law of gravity was explained a long time ago
But why do we still want to be high in the sky?
Someone rises, it happens sometimes
But they will fall and will be forgotten.

You came off of them and went into the shadows.
There are many wrong stars. It’s easy to be one of them.
You reached very high.
It’s impossible to fall from there.

Chorus 1:
The last hero is on the other riverside** (would use side of the river instead).
Not only for me you became a bright star.
I keep your sing song in my heart,
And I will finish the song for you.

Acts of geniuses can’t be explained,
But history remembers those and we are judged by them.
The people are dying out, they become the foam***.
Is there someone who can replace them?

Doesn’t matter where you are, even doesn’t even matter who you are.
Do your work honestly, do everything perfectly.
Then the sky will burn like a supernova
To be with us forever.

Chorus 2:
The last hero is on the other riverside.
For him and me, you became a bright star.
I keep your sing song in my heart,
And we will finish the song for you.

Chorus 3:
The last hero is on the other riverside.
I follow you (would probably either say, "I am following" or "will follow", depending on the meaning, just "follow" sounds odd).
I will collect everything you can’t anymore,
And I will finish the song for you.

Thank you for reading, thank you for your corrections. I appreciate every help. See you soon!

Interesting text, and I really liked the song :D
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*Yes, right on the start. “Не успеть” means “don’t be in time” but in this case, it means something else. It means “Your time gone. You had time to do it, but now it’s gone”. Maybe, it’s too late, maybe that person died and can’t do it. **It’s not the only river, it can be a lake or even sea. But “on the other bank” was confusing. I don’t like “Across the water” either. So I decided to translate it like that. PS: It can means “In the other country” either but it’s rarely used in that meaning. *** I don’t know what the Author means in this phrase

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