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Study at home Today,I got out of bed at 7:00 in the morning.Then,I drank a cup of water.Then I went to the bathroom,wash my face,brushed my teeth,combed my hair and tied a ponytail.After washing,I practiced bouncing a tennis ball with a racket for 10 minutes in the study.Then,I started to recite some Classical Chinese poems and English words.Then I uploaded my English recording homework.Then I read the Chinese Character Tree for half an hour, and practiced my handwriting for 15 minutes.At 9:00,I started to sketch until 11:00.I draw a bird.

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Studying at home

Today I got out of bed at 7:00 in the morning and drank a cup of water. Then I went to the bathroom to wash my face, brush my teeth, and comb my hair. In my hair I tied a ponytail. After washing, I practiced bouncing a tennis ball with a racket for 10 minutes. in the study.Next, I started to recite some classical Chinese poems and English words. I uploaded my recorded English homework.Then I read the Chinese Character Tree for half an hour, and practiced my handwriting for 15 minutes. Finally at 9:00 I started to sketch until 11:00. I drew a bird.
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Study at home

Today I got out of bed at 7:00 in the morning.Then I drank a cup of water.Then I went to the bathroom, washED my face, brushed my teeth, combed my hair and tied a ponytail. After washing MYSELF I practiced bouncing a tennis ball with a racket for 10 minutes in the study.Then I started to recite some Classical Chinese poems and REVISE English words.Then I uploaded my RECORDED English recording homework.Then I read the Chinese Character Tree for half an hour, and practiced my handwriting for 15 minutes. At 9:00 I started to sketch AND FINISHED AT until 11:00.I drEw a bird.

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Studying at home

Today, I got out of bed at 7:00 in the morning. Then, I drank a cup of water. Then After that, I went to the bathroom, washed my face, brushed my teeth, combed my hair and tied a ponytail. After washing getting ready, I practiced bouncing a tennis ball with a racket for 10 minutes in the study. Then, I started to recite some classical Chinese poems and English words. Then Next, I uploaded my English recording homework. Then Once I had finished, I read the Chinese character tree for half an hour, and practiced my handwriting for 15 minutes. At 9:00, I started to sketch until I finished at 11:00. I drew a bird.

Great paragraph! I noticed that you use the word 'then' a lot. You use it correctly, but I have added some alternatives for variety!

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