Quarantine
There is a lot of time since it has started. And it seems for most of us that we completely done about this obstacle we have been faced in 2020. I don’t want to discuss reasons and effects of Covid-19 and even read the news about this. I urge you to do the same at least while you are reading this.
We all need a breathe of fresh air. So let’s take some. And inspire ourselves.
Basically people have physical pause daily by having a restorative sleep. But that’s not enough because we have psychological pressure as well. We always find how to dig in problems, circumstances or just thoughts and I am sure that this time is not an exception. Most of the time we are the busiest people in our heads, thus the endless thoughts’ flow dips us into the constant stress. So pause is the best way to start a renovation. Before something new we need to purify ourselves mentally and physically.
Firstly, a good idea to spend time with yourself. You can start today or tomorrow. Take your time but do it as long as possible. Start with meditation, it could be guided or not and could last as long as you want, all is up to you. Be kind with yourself and it will help you to relax. Take shower or bath turning on the music you’ve never heard before but one of your favourite styles. Water will help you to get in touch with nature for a little. Personally I often turn sounds of nature while taking a shower and it seems to me that I am on Bali at this time. After this take a list of paper and write down all thoughts bothering you about situation you are in with this quarantine and tear this negatives up. You don’t need it anymore. The most important thing is to stop waiting till it ends and to live new full life in different conditions. Smile yourself and pour a glass of something. Champagne, water or orange juice what you really wish right now. Inhale and exhale. Now you are ready to take an inspiration journey to yourself.
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Quarantine
A lot of time has passed since it started. And it seems for most of us that we are completely done with this obstacle we have been faced in 2020 [I am not 100% sure what you mean by "done," so I am guessing]. I don’t want to discuss the reasons and effects of Covid-19 or even read the news about it. I urge you to do the same at least while you are reading this.
We all need a breathe of fresh air. So let’s take one. And inspire ourselves.
Basically, people have a daily physical pause by having a restorative sleep. But that’s not enough because we have psychological pressure as well. We always find how to dig in [new?--again, not sure what you mean] problems, circumstances, or just thoughts, and I am sure that this time is not an exception. Most of the time we are the busiest people in our heads; thus, the endless flow of thoughts flow dips us into the creates constant stress. So taking a pause is the best way to re-energize yourself. Before starting something new, we need to purify ourselves mentally and physically.
First, a good idea to spend time with yourself. You can start today or tomorrow. Take your time, but do it as long as possible. Start with meditation; it could be guided or not and could last as long as you want. It's all up to you. Be kind with yourself and it will help you to relax. Take a shower or bath and try listening to music you’ve never heard before, but maybe one of your favorite styles. Water will help you to get in touch with nature for a little bit/while. Personally, I often turn on sounds of nature while taking a shower and I feel like I am transported to Bali at this time.
After this, take a sheet of paper and write down all the thoughts bothering you about the situation you are in with this quarantine. And then, tear these negative thoughts up. You don’t need them anymore. The most important thing is to stop waiting until the quarantine ends and to live a new full life in different conditions. Smile yourself and pour a glass of something. Champagne, water, or orange juice, whatever you really want right now. Inhale and exhale. Now you are ready to take an inspirational journey for yourself.
[Phew! That was a lot of work. But it was worth it. The journey is the goal, right? So, great advice and great piece! You are obviously an advanced English student to be able to write such philosophical and inspirational prose. Be careful with comma splices and articles -- a an the -- in front of singular count nouns. Very nicely written; I hope the corrections help. Take care...]
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Quarantine
There has been a lot of time since it has started.
Or maybe better to say "It already started a long time ago"
And it seems that for most of us that we are completely done about this obstacle we have been faced in 2020.
Unclear meaning. What do you mean by 'completely done about this obstacle'?
I don’t want to discuss the reasons and effects of Covid-19 or even read the news about this. I urge you to do the same at least while you are reading this.
We all need a breathe of fresh air. So let’s take some. And inspire ourselves.
Basically people have physical pause daily by having a restorative sleep. But that’s not enough because we have psychological pressure as well. We always find how to dig in problems, circumstances or just thoughts and I am sure that this time is not an exception.
"We always find a way to get stuck in problems..." maybe sounds more natural.
Most of the time we are the busiest people in our heads, thus the endless thoughts’ flow dips us into this constant stress. So pause is the best way to start a renovation. Before something new we need to purify ourselves mentally and physically.
Firstly, a good idea is to spend time with yourself. You can start today or tomorrow. Take your time but do it as long as possible. Start with meditation, it could be guided or not and could last as long as you want, it's all up to you. Be kind with yourself and it will help you to relax. Take a shower or bath, turning on the music you’ve never heard before but one of your favourite styles. Water will help you to get in touch with nature for a while. Personally I often turn on sounds of nature while taking a shower and it feels like I am in Bali at this time. After this take a piece of paper and write down all thoughts bothering you about situation you are in with this quarantine and then tear this list of negatives up. You don’t need it anymore. The most important thing is to stop waiting till it ends and to live a new full life in different conditions. Smile to yourself and pour yourself a glass of something. Champagne, water or orange juice, whatever you really wish for right now. Inhale and exhale. Now you are ready to take an inspirational journey to yourself.
"inside yourself" or maybe "to your real self" or "inner self" sounds better. "To yourself" just sounds a bit wrong.
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