Back to the future
My favorite film is “Back to the future part I”. It was directed by Robert Zemeckis and it was published in 1985.
The principal actors were Michael J. Fox as “Marty McFly” and Christopher Lloyd as “Dr Brown”. This is the history of a guy, Marty, that accidentaly traveled in the past using a time machine. The time machine was created by the crazy inventor Mr Brown using a luxury car.
Marty returned in 1955 and interacted with the people of this era like his parents, the young Dr Brown and a lot of persons. All is very beautiful but there is a little problem: his actions in the past will impact on his life in 1985 because changing the facts consequently changing the facts in the present.
I suggest to watch this film because it could give ayou a lot of hints for your life and mostly since it’s very very funny.
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Back to the future
My favorite film is “Back to the future part I”. It was directed by Robert Zemeckis and it was published released in 1985.
The principal main actors were are Michael J. Fox as “Marty McFly” and Christopher Lloyd as “Dr Brown”. This is the history story of a guy, Marty, that accidentally traveled in to the past using a time machine. The time machine was created by the crazy inventor Mr Brown using a luxury car.
Marty returned in to 1955 and interacted with the people of this era like his parents, the young Dr Brown and a lot of persons other people. All is very beautiful but there is was a little small problem: his actions in the past will impact on his life in 1985 because changing the facts things in the past consequently changing the facts changes things in the present.
I suggest to watch watching/you watch this film because it could give you a lot of hints for your life and mostly since it’s very very funny.
Notes:
I removed "part I" because part I is implied if you just say the name of the movie.
Changed 'published' to 'released' because 'publish' is used more for books, articles, and magazines. For movies you can say 'release' or 'debut'
'The main actors' sounds more natural like a native speaker would say. 'The main actors are' because even though the movie released in the past, you are still saying the actors that are in it. Saying 'were' sounds like they used to be in the movie but now they're not. are sounds natural.
"This is the history story of a guy" - I see you speak Italian. "Historia" in Spanish can mean 'history' or 'story' depending on the context. If that is the same for Italian, then I can see why you used 'history'. But for English, 'history' and 'story' are used differently. In the case of this movie, it is telling a 'story' on screen!
The rest of my edits are to just make it sound more natural and like a native English speaker.
Overall this is a very good job!
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Back to the Future
My favorite film is “Back to the future part I”. It was directed by Robert Zemeckis and released in 1985.
The principal actors were Michael J. Fox as “Marty McFly” and Christopher Lloyd as “Dr Brown”. This is the story of a guy, Marty, who accidentaly traveled in the past using a time machine. The time machine was created by crazy inventor Mr Brown out of a luxury car.
Marty returned to 1955 and interacted with the people of this era like his parents, the young Dr Brown and many others. All is very beautiful but there is a little problem: his actions in the past will impact on his life in 1985 because changing the facts in the past will consequently change the facts in the present.
I suggest you watch this film because it could give you a lot of hints for your life and mostly since it’s very very funny.
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