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Differences and similarities between Middle and High School I went to a public Middle School, so there are some differences compared to High School, for example: in Middle School, laboratory instruments were old, some teachers didn’t teach, and it was smaller. When I entered High School, I decided to look up positive things, and it was easy to get used to newer laboratory instruments and many game courts, so I got back into my interest in school. I was used to smaller facilities so, in High School, I got lost easily looking for my classroom. My classmates know each other since Elementary School, but I am used to meeting new people, so it wasn’t hard to socialize. There are some similarities too, for example: I was used to staying late in Middle School, and in High School I can take extra classes or workshops if I want to. At both of them students are used to being under pressure from many classes. I ended up getting used to this school, I think it took me about 4 months, when I finally came across volleyball, besides, meeting people with common interests cheered me up too. I am totally used to the school now.

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Differences and similarities between Middle and High School

I went to a public Middle School, so there are some differences compared to High School, for example: in Middle School, laboratory instruments were old, some teachers didn’t teach, and it was smaller. When I entered High School, I decided to look up positive things, and it was easy to get used to newer laboratory instruments and many game courts, so I got back into my interest in school. I was used to smaller facilities so, in High School, I got lost easily looking for my classroom. My classmates know each other since Elementary School, but I am used to meeting new people, so it wasn’t hard to socialize.
There are some similarities too, for example: I was used to staying late in Middle School, and in High School I can take extra classes or workshops if I want to. At both of them students are used to being under pressure from many classes.
I ended up getting used to this school, I think it took me about 4 months, when I finally came across volleyball, besides, meeting people with common interests cheered me up too. I am totally used to the school now.

Good, hard to find mistakes, but a couple of sentences that are unclear:
"When I entered High School, I decided to look up positive things, and it was easy to get used to newer laboratory instruments and many game courts, so I got back into my interest in school."

I think by 'look up', you mean 'focus on', so it would sound better like this:
"When I entered High School, I decided to focus on positive things, and it was easy to get used to newer laboratory instruments and many game courts, so I got back into my interest in school."

"I ended up getting used to this school, I think it took me about 4 months, when I finally came across volleyball, besides, meeting people with common interests cheered me up too. I am totally used to the school now."

A bit unclear; was it four months to get used to the school, or 4 months to come across volleyball? Or both?
Maybe this would sound better:

"I think it took me about 4 months, when I came across volleyball, that I finally got used to this school. Besides, meeting people with common interests cheered me up too. I am totally used to the school now."



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