The Tafi del Valle trip
This is my first publication. Sorry for the mistakes.
On April 2019, my family and me went to Tafi del Valle, in Argentine where I am from.
That was on autumm. A ver quiet place, with a lake (El Mollar) aourrounded by mountains, small housing and beautufl landscape.
As we climbed the mountain roads, frends with gigantic leads, spread out from the solpes of the mountains. They seemed like they wanted to touch our car. Amazing
Once reached the top, the foliage became less leafy. It looked like a carpet. Some farmhouse with her cows on the green carpet, they remined me the brushwork of Guillermo Butler.
The time passed without realizing it and we had a lots of fun.
The two thousand four hundrer kilometers were worth it
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The Tafi del Valle trip
This is my first publication. Sorry for the mistakes.
On April 2019, my family and me I went to Tafi del Valle in Argentina where I am from.
That was on in autumn. It is a very quiet place, with a lake, El Mollar, surrounded by mountains, small houses, and a beautiful landscape.
As we climbed the mountain roads, (frends with gigantic leads)?, spread out from the slopes of the mountains. They seemed like they wanted to touch our car. Amazing! (I don't know what "friends with gigantic leads" are. Trees with gigantic branches?)
Once we reached the top, the foliage became less leafy. It looked like a carpet. Some farmhouses with her cows on the green pasture carpet , they reminded me of the brushwork of Guillermo Butler.
The time passed without realizing it, and we had a lots of fun. The two thousand four hundred kilometers were worth it.
This is a good first effort. Keep it up!
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The Tafi del Valle trip
This is my first publication. Sorry for the mistakes.
On April 2019, my family and me went to Tafi del Valle, in Argentine where I am from.
That was in autumm. A very quiet place, with a lake (El Mollar) surrounded by mountains, small housing and beautiful landscape.
As we climbed the mountain roads, frends with gigantic leads [I don't know what word this should be], spread out from the solpes of the mountains. They seemed like they wanted to touch our car. Amazing
Once we reached the top, the foliage became less leafy. It looked like a carpet. Some farmhouses with her cows on the green carpet, they remined me the brushwork of Guillermo Butler.
The time passed without us realizing it and we had a lots of fun.
The two thousand four hundrer kilometers were worth it
Autumn, friends, slopes, reminded, hundred
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