IELTS Writing Tas1# Bar Chart About Phone Sales
The bar chart gives information about the number of global five phone brand that sold and is divided into three periods.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the sold of Samsung, Apple and ZTE have risen, as opposed to, that of Nokia and LG have dropped throughout the period.
In terms of the increasing charts, the number of sales of Samsung experienced the highest-selling all of the period. It has been increased gradually from about 240 million to 440 million. Apple sold was beginning with the least number approximately 10 million in 2009, while it has been gone up by about 160 million in 2013. ZTE selling that is minimal increase is by around 5 million.
With regard to decreasing charts, the sales of Nokia showed the biggest downfall within a 4 year period by losing 200 million sales. Another branch, LG ,too, has gone down, however, it’s decline is lower than Nokia drop by 50 million-selling.
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IELTS Writing Tas1# Bar Chart About Phone Sales
The bar chart gives information about the (number of global five phone brand that sold and is divided into three periods.) the sales figures of 5 phone companies from around the world from 2009-2013. (Try to change the words form the title as much as possible)
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the sold of Samsung, Apple and ZTE's sales have risen rose over this 14-year period, as opposed to, that those of Nokia and LG have dropped throughout the period.which dropped.
In terms of the increasing chartsincrease, the number of sales of Samsung experienced the highest-selling all of the period sales of phones. It has beenThe number of phones sold increased gradually from about 240 million to 440 million. Apple sold was beginning with with the least number of sales at approximately 10 million in 2009, while it has been gone up by and which increased to about 160 million in 2013. ZTE selling that is sales had a minimal increase is by around 5 million.
With regard to decreasesing charts, the sales of Nokiais sales showed the biggest downfall dropped the most within a 4 year period by losing 200 million sales dollars. Another branch,company LG ,too, has gone down, also lost sales; however, it’s the decline is was lower than Nokia's drop by 50 million-selling.
You did a good job trying to use the numbers. Be careful in the intro..you need to change the words from the chart as much as possible while still keeping the meaning. I hope this helps!
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