Songs to Relax
What is your music taste? Researchers have found that ants like listening to classic music. Some people feel more relaxed when they listen to their favorite song be it rap, rock, pop, reggae whatever. The so called eclectic people have different music taste. I suppose it is mostly based on their daily mood. Heavy metal for stressful days. Some rap for inspiring days. Pop? Reggae? No, thanks. Recent studies have shown the type of song you listen to impacts directly on the way you think. For example, if you like listening to rock music while you do your homework you will more likely to have a hard time trying to concentrate, but of course it works differently for different people. I personally love listening music while I'm studying. Metallica, Megadeth, Iron Maiden, 2pac, Dre, Biggie are confirmed names on my playlist. Ok, but what if you like some music playing as you do your thing but you get distracted with it? Well, here's a light at the end of the tunnel. The research has also shown that people only happen to get distracted when they listen to songs they know whats being said. Therefore, if you don't speak corean for example why don't you listen to some K-pop? Anyways, as long as you don't understand the lyrics of the song your concentration will be fine.
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Hi Miguel,
What a great essay! Really. Yes, I would like to correct a few things, but the best part of your essay is that it's interesting and written in a lively style. And I learned a couple of things from you! Will see you again after the corrections....Ilene
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Songs to Relax To:
What is your musical taste? Does it help you to relax?
Researchers have found that ants like listening to classical music because it seems to make them???_________. Some people feel more relaxed when they listen to their favorite song, be it rap, rock, pop, reggae, whatever. The so-called eclectic people have different music(al) tastes. I supposed it is mostly based on their daily mood (s). Heavy metal for stressful days. Some rap for inspiring days. Pop? Reggae? No, thanks. (I love the way you wrote these short phrases Really gives some rhythm to your essay!
Recent studies have shown that the type of song you listen to directly impacts on the way you think. For example, if you like listening to rock music while you do your homework, you will more likely to have a hard time trying to concentrate. But, of course, it works differently for different people. I personally love listening to music while I'm studying. Metallica, Megadeth, Iron Maiden, 2pac, Dre and Biggie are confirmed names on my playlist.
Ok, but if you like some music playing as you do your thing, but you get distracted with it? Well, here's a light at the end of the tunnel. The research has also shown that people only happen to get distracted when they listen to songs when they know what's being said. Therefore, if you don't speak Korean, why don't you listen to some K-pop? Anyways As long as you don't understand the lyrics of the song, your concentration will be fine.
I felt the need to BREAK UP that long paragraph to make it easier to read. If I were you, I would use contractions more, such as you'll more likely..., etc.
But this is a fine essay. By the way, I really like soft rock, soft pop (if you can call it that) and I recently fell in love with the young Johnny Mathis. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V13-qOdoeHw. Well, he's not so young here, maybe to some of you, but he's my age here and I think he is so gorgeous.
Talk to you later, Miguel :)
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Songs to Relax
What is your music taste? Researchers have found that ants like listening to classic music. Some people feel more relaxed when they listen to their favorite song be it rap, rock, pop, reggae whatever. The so called eclectic people have different music taste. I suppose it is mostly based on their daily mood. Heavy metal for stressful days. Some rap for inspiring days. Pop? Reggae? No, thanks. Recent studies have shown the type of song you listen to impacts directly on the way you think. For example, if you like listening to rock music while you do your homework you will more likely have a hard time trying to concentrate, but of course it works differently for different people. I personally love listening to music while I'm studying. Metallica, Megadeth, Iron Maiden, 2pac, Dre, Biggie are confirmed names on my playlist. Ok, but what if you like some music playing as you do your thing but you get distracted with it? Well, here's a light at the end of the tunnel. The research has also shown that people only happen to get distracted listening to songs when they know whats being said. Therefore, if you don't speak Korean for example why don't you listen to some K-pop? Anyways, as long as you don't understand the lyrics of the song your concentration will be fine.
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