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Me in Covid-19 Season So, the Covid-19 have been effected earth for more or less 3 months already. And it seems to take forever to end the Virus. I am so afraid of the Covid, at first afraid being getting the virus but now I also afraid of running out of money, too. I am so scared and don't know what will be like in future. We waited and waited with hope but now the hope has become blurrer. I try to stay at home and try not to think about the financial, just try to do something useful and keep myself busy. But when it comes to face the fact, I am scared. I have a lot to pay: the renting for the shop, the credit cards, the taxes, the interests, the loans and the daily costs... The savings now coming to zero. Even, I am becoming a bigger debter. Luckily, the fear doesn't appear all the time. I am forgetful and optimistic so there are still a time I believe the Covid will over soon and I will earn enough money for all the stuff. I hope so. Everything will be O.K as long as we are safe. Thank you!

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Me in Covid-19 Season

So, the Covid-19 have been effected has affected earth for more or less 3 months already. And It seems to take forever to end the Virus. I am so afraid of the Covid, at first I was afraid being of getting contracting the virus but now I also afraid of running out of money, too. I am so scared and don't know what the situation will be like in future. We waited and waited with hope but now the hope has become blurrer is fading away. I try to stay at home and try not to think about the financial finances. Instead, I just try to do something useful and keep myself busy. But However, when it comes to face the fact, I am scared. I have a lot to pay: the renting for the shop, the my credit cards, the taxes, the interests, the loans and the daily costs... The savings are now coming to zero running out. Even Ultimately, I am becoming a bigger debter. I am getting into deeper debts.
Luckily, the fear doesn't appear all the time. I am forgetful and optimistic so there are still a times when I believe the that Covid will over soon and I will earn enough money for all the stuff my necessities.
I hope so. Everything will be O.K as long as we are safe.
Thank you!

Hello! Well done! Although I have made a few corrections, your writing is very good; I understood everything you explaining. I just have a few comments:

  • getting contracting The word 'getting' is correct, but the word 'contracting' is more specific when talking about a disease or virus.

  • the renting for the shop, the my credit cards, the taxes, the interests, the loans and the daily costs You don't need to put a definite article ( 'the') in front of every noun.

  • coming to zero running out If something has 'run out' it means that it is finished or used up.

  • the fear doesn't appear all the time You can also say, "I don't feel fearful all the time".

I hope this helps! :)
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Everyone has a similar situation. I hope the thing will be better soon.

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