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A funny experience I went to the vegetable market to do some grocery shopping this morning. I wanted to buy something to make dumplings. There are some green onions in my kichen, what other vegetable should I get. I walked around the market. There were many people walking, searching, and bargaining. I met my co-worker, Junmei. She told me that she was able to make a delisious dish of eggplants, and she had tole me how to make it. So I decided to get eggplants. After weighing I gave the money to the hawker and left. Later, I bought a radish and went home. I found that I forgot to carry my eggplants when I got home, I left them at the hawker's. I had to returned to the market. The hawker gave the vegetable to me and said,"How careless you are. I know you will be back for the eggplants.' Hehe, I am really careless. I always joke that I am Mr. Forgot.

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A funny experience

I went to the vegetable market to do some grocery shopping this morning. I wanted to buy something to make dumplings. There are was some green onions in my kichen. What other vegetables should I get? I walked around the market. There were many people walking, searching and bargaining. I met my co-worker, Junmei. She told me that she was able to make a delisious delicious dish of/with eggplants, and she had tole told me how to make it, so I decided to get eggplants. After weighing, I gave the money to the hawker / paid the hawker and left. Later, I bought a radish and went home. When I got home,
I found that I had forgotten to carry take my eggplants when I got home, I had left them at the hawker's. I had to returned to the market. The hawker gave me the vegetables to me and said, "How careless you are! I know knew you will would be back for the eggplants.'
Hehe, I am really careless. I always joke that I am Mrs. Forgot Forgetful / if you are not married, you are Ms Forgetful.

How have the dumplings come out?  好吃不好吃?

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                      A Funny Experience

I went to the vegetable market to do some grocery shopping this morning. I wanted to buy something to make dumplings. There are some green onions in my kichenkitchen. What other vegetables should I get? I walked around the market. There were many people walking, searching, and bargaining. I met my co-worker, Junmei. She told me that she was able to make a delisious delicious dish of eggplants, and she had tole told me how to make it. So I decided to get eggplants. After weighing, I gave the money to the hawker and left. Later, I bought a radish and went home.
When I got home, I found that I forgot had forgotten to carry take my eggplants when I got home. I had left them at the hawker's. I had to returned to the market. The hawker gave the vegetable to me and said, "How careless you are. I know knew you will would be back for the eggplants."
Hee hee! I am really careless. I always joke that I am Mr. Forgot Mrs. Forgetful.

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A Funny Experience

This morning, I went to the vegetable market to do for some grocery shopping this morning. I wanted to buy get something to make dumplings. There are were some green onions in my kichen. I thought to myself,

 

"What other vegetables should shall I get?"

 

. I walked around the market. There were many people walking, searching, and bargaining. I met my co-worker, Junmei. She told me that she was able to makes a delisious mean1 dish of eggplants. , and she had tole She taught me how to make it. So I decided to get some eggplants. After weighing them I gave the money to paid the hawker and left. Later on, I bought a radish and went home.


I found that I forgot to carry my eggplants To my horror, I found that I had left the eggplants when I got home, I left them at the hawker's. No choive but I had to returned to the market. The hawker gave the vegetable to me and admonished me gently, said,

"How careless you are. I know you will be back for the eggplants.'
Hee hee, I am really careless. I always joke that I am Miss Forgetfulness.2 Mr. Forgot.

1.   This is slang, meaning outstanding.  I believe using this slang here makes your writing a bit more lively here.  Usually I don't encourage using slang.

2.   Although Katya is correct in her comments, I do not quite agree with her in this case.  In using, "Mrs. Forgetful", it means that your husband is forgetful and you are not.  You are just the wife of someone forgetful.  So it is better to use, "Ms", "Miss", "Madam" etc to describe yourself.

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i like ur writing

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