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Living in a big city is very stressful. All people who live there are nervous and rude. I agree with this opinion. Every day people who live in the city are in a stressful environment fast pace of life and increased noise level all this takes a lot of effort and energy so people feel more tired . Also, people have to constantly rush either to work or to the bus because they do not want to be late and get stuck in rush hour traffic. As a result, people often spend a lot of time just getting from one place to another. Moreover, people in big cities consider it most important to succeed in life . They want to get a high-paying job have an apartment a car and a lot of money . therefore, they have to live in a constant race for a better life and fight in a highly competitive environment for the best place. Thus living in the city people regularly experience fear and stress which in the end has a bad effect on the psychological state of a person. Indeed, a person can become nervous and irritable and sometimes take out negative emotions on others.

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Living in a big city is very stressful. All people who live there are nervous and rude.

I agree with this opinion that every day people who live in the city are in a stressful environment, fast paced of life and with increased noise level all this takes which comes from a lot of effort and energy so many people and they feel get more tired easily. Also People as well have to constantly rush either to work or to the bus either because they do not want to be late and or get stuck in rush hour traffic. As a result, people often spend a lot of time just getting from one place to another. Moreover people in big cities consider it most very important to succeed in life. They want (or aim) to get a high-paying job in order to have an apartment, a car, and a lot of money. Therefore, they have to live in a constant race for a better life and fight to strive in a highly competitive environment in order to get to the best places.

Thus (In conclusion) people living in the city regularly experience fear and stress which in the end has a bad effect in the psychological state of a person. Indeed, a person can become nervous and irritable and sometimes take out express negative emotions on to others.

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