Wish they happy in heaven
Today morning ,my teacher asked me, “What were you doing at 10:00 in Qingming Holiday?”
When I heard this question,I became very sad.I said,“we were missing the people in the heaven,so all the cars were sounded the whistle and we lowered flag at half-staff.”
We only live once.Some people leaved our forever.Thanks those bravery and kindness doctors,nurses,policemen,workers in government or community ,people in WuHan,and etc.Wish they are happy in heaven.We’ll always remember them.
China refueling!World refueling！
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When I heard this question, I became very sad. I said, “We were missing the people in the heaven, so all the cars were sounded the whistle honking their horns and we lowered flag at to half-staff.”
We only live once. Some people leaved our have left us forever. Thanks those those brave and kind doctors, nurses, policemen, workers in government or in the community, people in WuHan, and etc. Wish I hope they are happy in heaven. We’ll always remember them.
China refueling! World refueling！
Very nice writing, Nemo. I just made a few corrections.
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I wish they are happy in heaven
Today in the morning ,my teacher asked me, “What were you doing at 10:00 in Qingming Holiday?”
When I heard this question,I became very sad.I said,“we were missing the people in heaven，so all the cars were honking there horns and we lowered the flag at half-mast.”
We only live once.Some people have left forever.Thanks to the bravery and kindness of doctors,nurses,policemen,workers in government or community ,people in WuHan,and etc. I Wish they are happy in heaven.We’ll always remember them.
China refueling!World refueling！
PS had to make some guesses to what you were trying to say hope this helps
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