The news of Japanese famous comedian sudden death
The news that Shimura Ken of Japanese famous comedian died last night due to infected coronavirus was broadcasted.
I have been watching him on TV from when I was child, he still played an active parts as a comedian regularly.
I heard from the news that he infected coronavirus then hospitalization on Mar 20, I didn't think that he will die.
My family and I were very surprised after we heard that news.
I was made to right feel the threat of the coronavirus popular this time again.
昨日の夜に日本の有名なコメディアンの志村けんさんが、コロナに掛かり亡くなったとのニュースが流れました
私が小さな頃からテレビで見ていて、未だに現役でコメディアンとして活躍されていました。
3/25にコロナに掛かり入院したとのニュースを聞いてましたが、まさかなくなるとは思っていなかったので
私の家族もそのニュースを聞いて大変驚いていました。
まさに、今回流行しているコロナの恐ろしさを改めて感じさせられました。
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The news of a Famous Japanese famous Comedian's Sudden Death
The news that Shimura Ken, a famous of Japanese famous comedian, died last night due to infected coronavirus was broadcasted.
(Easier sentence structure: The news broadcasted that Shimura Ken, a famous Japanese comedian, died last night due to coronavirus.)
I have been watching him on TV from when since I was child; he still played an active parts as a comedian regularly.
I heard from the news that he was infected with coronavirus then hospitalized ation on Mar 20. I didn't think that he will would die.
My family and I were very surprised after we heard that news.
I strongly felt was made to right feel the threat of the wide-spread coronavirus popular this time again.**
(**Your meaning in the last sentence is not entirely clear. If I understand correctly, you meant something like: Because of this news, I felt that the the threat of coronavirus was still strong.)
昨日の夜に日本の有名なコメディアンの志村けんさんが、コロナに掛かり亡くなったとのニュースが流れました
私が小さな頃からテレビで見ていて、未だに現役でコメディアンとして活躍されていました。
3/25にコロナに掛かり入院したとのニュースを聞いてましたが、まさかなくなるとは思っていなかったので
私の家族もそのニュースを聞いて大変驚いていました。
まさに、今回流行しているコロナの恐ろしさを改めて感じさせられました。
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The news of Japan's ese famous comedian's sudden death
The news that Shimura Ken, the famous of Japanese famous comedian, died last night due the infected coronavirus, was broadcasted.
I have been watching him on TV from when I was a child, he still regularly played an active parts as a comedian regularly.
I heard on from the news that he was infected with the coronavirus and hospitalised then hospitalization on March 20, I didn't think that he would will die.
My family and I were very sad surprised after we heard the that news.
I felt was made to right feel the threat of the coronavirus popular this time again.
昨日の夜に日本の有名なコメディアンの志村けんさんが、コロナに掛かり亡くなったとのニュースが流れました
私が小さな頃からテレビで見ていて、未だに現役でコメディアンとして活躍されていました。
3/25にコロナに掛かり入院したとのニュースを聞いてましたが、まさかなくなるとは思っていなかったので
私の家族もそのニュースを聞いて大変驚いていました。
まさに、今回流行しているコロナの恐ろしさを改めて感じさせられました。
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The news of Japanese famous comedian sudden death
The news that Shimura Ken of Japanese famous comedian died last night due to infected coronavirus was broadcasted.
I have been watching him on TV since I was child, he still played active parts as a comedian regularly.
I heard from the news that he was infected with coronavirus then hospitalization on Mar 20, I didn't think that he would die.
My family and I were very surprised after we heard that news.
I understand the threat of the coronavirus now.
昨日の夜に日本の有名なコメディアンの志村けんさんが、コロナに掛かり亡くなったとのニュースが流れました
私が小さな頃からテレビで見ていて、未だに現役でコメディアンとして活躍されていました。
3/25にコロナに掛かり入院したとのニュースを聞いてましたが、まさかなくなるとは思っていなかったので
私の家族もそのニュースを聞いて大変驚いていました。
まさに、今回流行しているコロナの恐ろしさを改めて感じさせられました。
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Dear Kazushi,
Your use of the comma is not correct. A comma is mostly used in complex sentences where one part of the sentence is separated from the other part using a comma. I suggest you see the definition of the complex sentences for further explanation.
Further, the sentence "I heard from the news that he infected coronavirus then hospitalization on Mar 20, I didn't think that he will die" could be written as "I heard about his getting infected by the coronavirus and subsequent hospitalization on March 20th, but I didn't think that he would die".
Regards
S. Asif
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