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Barn swallow May someone help to proofread this? Barn swallow has a blue-blackish body, a white belly and a forked tail, with red markings on the forehead and on its throat. It is extremely good at catching and feeding on insects mid-air at a high speed flight.

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The Barn Swallow

May someone help to proofread this?

The barn swallow has a blue-blackish body, a white belly, and a forked tail, with red markings both on its forehead and on its throat. It is extremely adept at catching and feeding on insects mid-air during high-speed flight.

Hi, Clara. This is how I would do it. It could be “on both” just as easily though! I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.

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