Hi today is monday i am so happy i have lot activities for make. in the first time i am goint to take a breakfast whit me best friend clara she in the central park righ now i am so happy whit this meet. we want make a trip in dicember i thik alemania is a good place for know.

MONDAY

Hi! Today is Monday. I am so happy I have a lot of things to do. For the first time I am going to have breakfast with my best friend Clara. She is in the central park right now. I am so happy with this meetup. We want to take a trip in December. I think Germany is a good place.

Nice going, Nathaly! I think for your current fluency, it's best to keep your sentences short. That way you can get your message across and you'd be more understandable. Correct me if I'm wrong, do you mean Germany for Alemania? Sorry, I don't quite get what you mean in for know. Anyway, your sentences are full of positivity. Keep it up!

MONDAY

Hi today is monday i am so happy i have lot activities for make. in the first time i am goint to take a breakfast whit me best friend clara she in the central park righ now i am so happy whit this meet. we want make a trip in dicember i thik alemania is a good place for know.

Hi, today is Monday and I am so happy because I have lot activities to do. First of all I am really looking forward to take breakfast with my best friend Clara who is in (the *If its in NYC its 'Central Park', if its just 'a' central park in another, smaller, less well known town or city then, its 'the central park) central park right now. We want take a trip in December and I am thinking that Germany is a good place to explore. (...+ perhaps: I can't wait to talk to her about it!)

Hope this helps!

MONDAY

Hi. Today is Monday. I am so happy that I have a lot of activities for make to do. in It is the first time I am going to take a breakfast whit with me. My best friend, Clara, she is in the central park right now. I am so happy whit with this meet. We want make take a trip in December. I think Alemania is a good place for know to go.

MONDAY

Hi, today is Monday. I am so happy I have lot activities for make planned. in the First time I am goint going to take a breakfast whit with me. My best friend Clara she is in the central park righ right now. I am so happy whit this meet to see her. We want make a trip in dicember December. I thik alemania think Germany is a good place for know to travel and learn about.

Hi Nathaly, I made a lot of little changes, but you’re on the right track. Keep up the good work.